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Storm's of Memory

i felt the tempest coming onslaught umbrage from darkest skies its thunder rumbled in endless echoes across the grains of mountain's rock i saw it flash its arrant light piercing through the tips of trees emanating crimson trails upon the ground i stood in its pools of blood as if assailed in its draft its winded breath piercing through my heart like wounded love i saw you there momentarily blinking in and out of the shadows of memories

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John Hamilton

Date: 10/3/2019 5:12:00 PM

Ditto to Cay Cay...so there you have it Queen of free verse now that's the kind of reign I don't mind (catch the wordplay?)

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 5:19:00 PM

ha, i did catch the word play and adore you comment, it was a bright spot on this gloomy day for sure... the rain made for a longer day for me ...and nothing to look at but gray skies, puddles, and fogged windows... Thank you John, love your comment :) hugs

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 10/3/2019 4:31:00 PM

Such lovely imagery Sandy my friend, this is superb writing indeed. Blessings and hugs, Gordon

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 5:20:00 PM

Thank you so much Gordon....rainy day around these parts... hoping tomorrow the sun shines over me :) hugs

Bobby May

Date: 10/3/2019 12:16:00 PM

CayCay said it all my friend!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 2:12:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend :) hugs

Chris Green

Date: 10/3/2019 11:39:00 AM

Seems that dreary day is still hovering over your part of the world. Sad my friend but once again, beautifully expressed and amazing imagery. Your words reach out and touch the reader, we can feel these emotions.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 2:14:00 PM

Thank you my friend. Still a dreary day but I had some sunshine in it. Second day this week the person in front of me bought my coffee at my favorite Coffee spot. Always cool when others are kind :) hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/3/2019 11:36:00 AM

Storms of memory..thunder.. echo..flash..metaphors for life's sad moments..well written as always, Sandy..loved the ending stanza.

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much Vijay we went from Gorgeous summer like weather to dreary chilly autumn rainy weather overnight ... hugs

CayCay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2019 11:15:00 AM

YOU are the QUEEN of free verse imagery. I love the thrill I feel each time I'm impressed while reading you - no pressure there, huh? You keep raising your impact level to new highs that delight me. You are now on top of me on the 100 Contest Winners list, we two BD girls. I got my new # today, you? (I forgot) LOVE this poem. (oh, I watched my Dad make his transition so I know and hold the feel that never leaves) You're awesome, Sandra. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 2:16:00 PM

Aww thank you my friend. That’s only because you don’t write as often as me. You rock :) hugs

Hello There

Date: 10/3/2019 11:05:00 AM

Wow, this is a pretty cool piece... how you paint this picture so vividly is incredible! Awesome, Sandra!!

Sandra Adams
Date: 10/3/2019 2:17:00 PM

Thank you so much my friend your comment made me smile this gloomy day