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Storm Warrior

A northeaster snow storm is rampaging air A roughshod young warrior, launching ice as a spear Without any warning, he comes from nowhere bending trees into sickles, while he conquers with fear Plowing up roads with a gust and a till Burying leaves along the gutters and streets Furrowing rows out of valleys and hills Prodding the herds with a howl and a shriek The sun takes retreat with solemn dismay and holds fast his tongue with whimpering sounds Rendering helpless, behind hail and flay Biding his time, while the snow pelts the ground From the sphere of the dawn, into cold afternoon war is schooled by the whims of the moon
___________________________________________________ Contest: "Pick A Subject" ----Storm Resubmitted for Brian Strand's Contest: 219

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/7/2015 9:20:00 PM
I for one have seen quite enough snow GAH! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 3/7/2015 8:19:00 AM
I really enjoyed your Sonnet Carrie! Congrats to your well-deserved WIN!!! ^_^
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Date: 3/6/2015 6:23:00 PM
congrats on the win Carrie
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Date: 3/6/2015 2:47:00 AM
Carrie, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/5/2015 1:33:00 PM
Wow! Your personification of the Northeaster is amazing, Carrie. Congratulations on a well-deserved, first-place win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:51:00 AM
schooled by the whims of the moon--wonderful Carrie. Congrats...rajat
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:33:00 AM
wonderful personification and imagery Carrie - brilliant take on the theme - many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2015 7:22:00 AM
Carrie, a beautifully written personification of the storm as a warrior, along with such rich imagery. He has definitely invaded us here in the Northeast this year! Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 3/5/2015 6:19:00 AM
superb Carrie you never disappoint congrats an 1st place hugs
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:07:00 PM
So enjoyed reading this. Carrie. Great write. Hugs janet
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Carrie Richards
Date: 3/4/2015 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for this, and your other kind comments. It is a joy to hear from you, Janet. Thanks so much!

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