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“Within the fog, the distant mountains strain, bruised in shades of lavender and forest green each angle, decomposing in the rain.” The lion roars; clouds morph into its mane as lightning flashes streak across the scene, within the fog, the distant mountains strain. Gusting winds spin a rusty weather vane testing the sturdiness of Man's machine, each angle, decomposing in the rain. The river rises as soggy slopes drain and fresh, purified air, smells ozone clean, within the fog, the distant mountains strain. The clouds soon disperse; just a few remain and the leaves on the trees regain their sheen, each angle, decomposing in the rain. Defeated; the monster is quickly slain, and skies shift from grey to aquamarine. Within the fog, the distant mountains strain, each angle, decomposing in the rain. (Villanelle) 4/28/2021 Choose Your Form Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joseph May

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Date: 5/18/2021 2:49:00 PM
such vivid imagery Emile i too chose this stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2021 5:59:00 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 11:21:00 AM
Hello Emile, I love the way you describe the sky. The sound of thunder. A great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2021 4:03:00 PM
Hello Emile, I am happy to hear this Emile. Enjoy yur evening my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, you comments are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 9:18:00 AM
Emile, this is a beautifully-composed piece with vivid imagery. I loved "The lion roars; clouds morph into its mane." Very descriptive and perfect form. Good luck in the contest. I see you at the top! Ditto to Unseeking Seeker.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thanks milt, you know how to bring a smile to my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 8:39:00 AM
What a delight to read!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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