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Shrouded in mist, the skies seem so mundane, offset by shades of lavender and green; ordinary, redefined by the rain. As thunder roars, clouds morph into a mane and lightning flashes streak across the scene; shrouded in mist, the skies seem so mundane. Gusting winds spin a rusty weather vane testing the sturdiness of Man's machine; ordinary, redefined by the rain. The river rises as soggy slopes drain and electrified air smells ozone-clean; shrouded in mist, the skies seem so mundane. The clouds disperse; only a few remain, yet the leaves on the trees retain their sheen, ordinary, redefined by the rain. The monstrous storm, now depleted and slain, the grey skies shift back to aquamarine. Shrouded in mist, the skies seem so mundane; ordinary, redefined by the rain.

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Date: 5/18/2021 2:49:00 PM
such vivid imagery Emile i too chose this stanza, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2021 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Jan, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/14/2021 5:59:00 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/14/2021 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Joseph, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 11:21:00 AM
Hello Emile, I love the way you describe the sky. The sound of thunder. A great poem. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/28/2021 4:03:00 PM
Hello Emile, I am happy to hear this Emile. Enjoy yur evening my friend.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 1:13:00 PM
Thanks Darlene, you comments are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 9:18:00 AM
Emile, this is a beautifully-composed piece with vivid imagery. I loved "The lion roars; clouds morph into its mane." Very descriptive and perfect form. Good luck in the contest. I see you at the top! Ditto to Unseeking Seeker.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 9:21:00 AM
Thanks milt, you know how to bring a smile to my day, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2021 8:39:00 AM
What a delight to read!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2021 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Unseeking, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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