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Storm At Sea

STORM AT SEA windswept crashing dark waves guise of lids closed ~ dark shades rain shatters reflective pool, glass pupils ~ shark eyes silver and cold fin, watches ship cruise by diners enter famished 5/8/2017 Cinquin Form

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Dean Wood

Date: 5/16/2017 8:49:00 AM

This is really descriptive. I am with Connie; kinda gave me the shivers. - Dean

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/16/2017 9:49:00 AM

Thank you, Dean!

Chris Green

Date: 5/15/2017 6:23:00 AM

Sounds like the diners aren't the only ones famished. Really nicely done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, Chris!

Darren White

Date: 5/15/2017 1:54:00 AM

OOooooo glass pupils! Now that's an image I love! Beautiful. What a great cinquain :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/15/2017 7:10:00 AM

Thank you, Darren!

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 5/14/2017 9:58:00 PM

Poetic, belle!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2017 10:00:00 PM

Merci, Etienne!:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/14/2017 9:48:00 PM

This poem kind of gave me the chills Kim. I am afraid to be out in the open sea on a cruise ship. As long as I can see shore I am fine. Cinquain are superb! 7 ; )

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2017 10:13:00 PM

I love looking over the ship's balcony but the door has to stay closed as I go to sleep. Thanks so much for the 7, Connie! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2017 10:01:00 PM

I love looking over the ship's balcony but the door has to stay closed as I go to sleep. Thanks so much for the 7, Connie! :)