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Poetic Form: Sedoka
Inspired: 2024 February 12
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storm clouds moving in cleared small things tied-up big things wind and rain came and they stayed storm clouds gone not storm neighbors in yard much anger trees fall fence smash my things gone

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Date: 2/12/2024 1:36:00 PM
must've been one horrific storm! I can't image surviving such a storm only to discover one's worldly possessions are gone. Nicely done!
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Date: 2/12/2024 2:28:00 PM
A go w/sedoka form--testing the waters--Thanks, Sara. Aloha, William

Book: Shattered Sighs