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Storm Clouds

STORM CLOUDS Storm clouds gathering again from the Pacific Over this graveyard and its winged totems, Cedar stories rich in legends, these items --- Of far-off people, Shamans, and soaring spirits prolific. --- Of the sea Indians - salmon fishermen - now absent From the Weywakum cabins at the choppy anchorage, * Facing the ragged edge of the Inside Passage * With its grey waves and treacherous current. Graveyards always feel shivery and cold, But these souls are sealed at peace from storms. My eyes begin to brim as I read the stones Marking the changing currents of life age-old. The chill wind pierces my jacket, waters my eyes. Gathering in the darkling day without any dawn, Storm petrels from far Quatsino Sound blown * Into the ragged edges of grey clouds in the wintry skies. ………………………..................................................................… NOTE *Weywakum Indians, Inside Passage, Quatsino Sound are all well-known local people and places around Campbell River, B C ……………………………………………………………………………………………. Written by Sydney Peck 13th August 2011, For Francine Roberts’ Contest “Totems in the Darkening Sky”

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Date: 8/23/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:09:00 AM
YOur on a roll..this was so enjoyable ..Congrats. BG
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:40:00 AM
hey Sydney congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on a great write Sydney
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:59:00 PM
Very, very nice Sydney and Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:53:00 PM
smart. congrats!
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:49:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your fabulous fourth place win in Totem...
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:19:00 PM
congrats on your fourth place win Syd, wonderfully done, good research here
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Date: 8/13/2011 2:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem! Wonderfully written, I enjoyed the enclosed rhyme! Good luck in the contest!!
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