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Storm Clouds

STORM    CLOUDS  
    

Storm clouds gathering again from the Pacific
Over this  graveyard and its winged totems,
Cedar stories rich in legends, these items 
---  Of far-off people, Shamans, and soaring spirits prolific.

---  Of the sea Indians - salmon fishermen - now absent 
From the Weywakum cabins at the choppy anchorage,  *
Facing the ragged edge of the Inside Passage   *
With its grey waves and treacherous current.

Graveyards always feel shivery and cold,
But these souls are sealed at peace from storms.
My eyes begin to brim as I read the stones
Marking the changing currents  of life age-old.

The chill wind pierces my jacket, waters my eyes.
Gathering in the darkling day without any dawn,
Storm  petrels from far Quatsino Sound blown   *
Into the ragged edges of grey clouds in the wintry skies.

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NOTE

*Weywakum  Indians,  Inside Passage,  Quatsino Sound  are all 
well-known local people and places around Campbell River, B C

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Written  by   Sydney  Peck    13th August  2011,
For  Francine  Roberts’  Contest    “Totems in the Darkening Sky”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/23/2011 1:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine Roberts' "Totems in the Darkening Sky" contest Syd. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2011 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Great job Caryl Ramsdale
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Date: 8/20/2011 10:09:00 AM
YOur on a roll..this was so enjoyable ..Congrats. BG
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Date: 8/20/2011 3:40:00 AM
hey Sydney congrats on your win David
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Date: 8/20/2011 12:16:00 AM
Congratulations on a great write Sydney
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:59:00 PM
Very, very nice Sydney and Congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:53:00 PM
smart. congrats!
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Date: 8/19/2011 11:49:00 PM
Congrats Sydney on your fabulous fourth place win in Totem...
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Date: 8/19/2011 10:19:00 PM
congrats on your fourth place win Syd, wonderfully done, good research here
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Date: 8/13/2011 2:44:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem! Wonderfully written, I enjoyed the enclosed rhyme! Good luck in the contest!!
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