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STORM the clash the flash \\\\\\\\\\\ of lightening and thunder her tone his anger ######## of choreographed wonder her scintilla lids his cursive wrinkles $&@$&@$&@ ripping, roaring – toppling trees rain must come sorrow takes a walk ::::::::::::::::::::::: deluge dashes room to room slamming doors punching walls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! all at once a rainbow she looks up he remembers @@ @@ “i’m sorry” – he “so sorry” – she water recedes with cosseted hugs ****************************** each storm a star on heaven’s window ************* ***************** the home of marriage protected by stilts Kim Rodrigues © 2017

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Date: 3/17/2017 9:20:00 PM
Excellent, Kim! I think most couples can relate to having some battles, but with sorrow and remorse, there's hope. I love the ending...hugs, Rhonda
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2017 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rhonda!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/17/2017 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rhonda!
Date: 3/16/2017 4:25:00 PM
The drama that you unfolded, I have lived and wonder if any married person has not! Your styling worked for me, effectively highlighting the inner turmoil and struggle of such conflicts. Your creativity combined well with reality, producing a poem worth reading, Kim. Good job. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/16/2017 4:51:00 PM
Thanks so much CayCay! :) <3

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