Storm

storm Black as death the rain comes down, Lightening, frightens poor old Ferret, Bolts are falling all around, Step outside, you’ll wear it, Waters rising, swim or drown, bit. Francine Roberts Contest Name One English Quintain

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Russell Sivey

Date: 8/30/2011 6:56:00 PM

Great, wonderfully written poem! I love the first line, "Black as death the rain comes down," it's a terrific line! Love the write!! Good luck it the contest...should do exceptional!!

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/30/2011 10:35:00 AM

soup mail Don

John Smith

Date: 8/30/2011 8:25:00 AM

I can hear you thunder from way up here. Go somewhere high.

Tony Lane

Date: 8/30/2011 7:51:00 AM

Great entry. Good Luck! Tony

Emma Mantle

Date: 8/30/2011 3:57:00 AM

A great entry for Francine's contest. Very descriptive. Best wishes Em :)

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 8/30/2011 3:26:00 AM

Terrific write mate lightening bolts frighten me as well, but I like to wear the rain.....good luck on contest...your mate old Jack

Don Johnson
Date: 8/30/2011 5:42:00 AM

Thunderbolts are falling here, pouring rain, wet, big sparks near, Dog's in bed, transfixed with fear, but im on the bloody puter, good on you cobber Jack, be strong and powerful, in the black... from the johnson nong