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Stories of Evil Make Me Dizzy

Old Bobby lives next door to me. I’d never been inside his home till yesterday when he disclosed why he’s alone and prone to roam. Through tears he told me when he was a well-known, wealthy businessman, his greedy, grasping wife and sons came up with a horrendous plan to plant him in a six-foot hole and claim the life they’d long desired. They’d lived quite well but wanted ALL the money. Then the “thug” they hired turned out to be a cop. They served long prison terms. He moved the day he learned about their treachery. Heartbroken, Bobby lost his way. He spent his hard-earned money at the poker games and liquor store, but that was many years ago. He’d find a better path, he swore. This satisfied old handy man now shuffles on from job to job. He makes enough to live the way he chooses. I admire old Bob. His story’s not unusual. Some people value money more than lives. Thoughts of their evil make me dizzy, shake me to the core. Date: August 21, 2019 Contest Title: Bring a Character to Life placed 2nd Sponsor: Richard Lamoureau

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Date: 9/8/2019 9:07:00 AM
I’m glad you are pleased. Do drop by for a visit.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/8/2019 2:16:00 PM
Will do!
Date: 9/8/2019 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish with your story brought to life by your well penned words.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/8/2019 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jeanne! Janice
Date: 9/8/2019 12:44:00 AM
Great story telling. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your second place finish.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/8/2019 6:50:00 AM
Richard, I am so thrilled with my 2nd place win! THANK YOU! Janice
Date: 9/7/2019 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations on this great fictional write. Hugs Eve
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 9/7/2019 10:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 8/22/2019 1:35:00 AM
Hello Janice … a well written tale Janice. Greed has a terrible way of destroying lives. Thank you Janice; I did enjoy your tale - Lindsay
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/22/2019 7:35:00 AM
Lindsay, thank you so much. Janice
Date: 8/21/2019 12:43:00 PM
That was absolutely fantastic Janice. It flowed so nicely that it felt almost song-like as I read. I found myself rooting for him along the way. Best wishes in the contest
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/21/2019 1:07:00 PM
Chris, your comment has made my day! THANK YOU! Janice

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