Stories of Evil Make Me Dizzy

Old Bobby lives next door to me.
I’d never been inside his home
till yesterday when he disclosed 
why he’s alone and prone to roam.
Through tears he told me when he was
a well-known, wealthy businessman,
his greedy, grasping wife and sons
came up with a horrendous plan
to plant him in a six-foot hole
and claim the life they’d long desired.
They’d lived quite well but wanted ALL 
the money. Then the “thug” they hired 
turned out to be a cop. They served
long prison terms. He moved the day
he learned about their treachery.
Heartbroken, Bobby lost his way.
He spent his hard-earned money at
the poker games and liquor store,
but that was many years ago.
He’d find a better path, he swore.

This satisfied old handy man
now shuffles on from job to job.
He makes enough to live the way
he chooses. I admire old Bob.

His story’s not unusual.
Some people value money more
than lives. Thoughts of their evil make
me dizzy, shake me to the core.


Date: August 21, 2019

Contest Title: Bring a Character to Life        placed 2nd

Sponsor: Richard Lamoureau
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 9:07 AM
I’m glad you are pleased. Do drop by for a visit.
Canerdy Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 2:16 PM
Will do!
Mcgee Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 8:05 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish with your story brought to life by your well penned words.
Canerdy Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thanks so much, Jeanne! Janice
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 12:44 AM
Great story telling. Thanks for entering my contest and congrats on your second place finish.
Canerdy Avatar
September 8, 2019 at 6:50 AM
Richard, I am so thrilled with my 2nd place win! THANK YOU! Janice
Roper Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations on this great fictional write. Hugs Eve
Canerdy Avatar
September 7, 2019 at 10:39 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Laurie Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 1:35 AM
Hello Janice … a well written tale Janice. Greed has a terrible way of destroying lives. Thank you Janice; I did enjoy your tale - Lindsay
Canerdy Avatar
August 22, 2019 at 7:35 AM
Lindsay, thank you so much. Janice
Green Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 12:43 PM
That was absolutely fantastic Janice. It flowed so nicely that it felt almost song-like as I read. I found myself rooting for him along the way. Best wishes in the contest
Canerdy Avatar
August 21, 2019 at 1:07 PM
Chris, your comment has made my day! THANK YOU! Janice
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