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Stopping To Stare

Allow me the privilege of stopping to stare— At a pretty young girl with bright purple hair. Or, that buxom maiden who has quite a pair The one wearing no bra, standing over there. A brash young fellow with cap turned around Britches pulled down--almost to the ground. A grossly fat dude tattooed head down to toe With a breath-takingly beautiful lady in tow. I stopped to help this homeless man in need He suddenly offered me a toke on his weed. “Music” from the car in the next lane is blaring I am holding my ears, but I cannot stop staring. The exhaust of a motorcycle deafening loud I suppose it makes the hog’s owner feel proud. A man wearing a pigtail reaching to his butt In our local grocery a woman carrying a mutt. An aged woman riding on a three-wheel tricycle Juggling from hand to hand a half-eaten popsicle. Things are normal, quite ordinary, as you can see Nothing wrong with anybody – I guess it’s me!
FOURTH PLACE WINNER written July 23, 2021 for "An Interesting Couplet" poetry contest sponsored by Funom Makama

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Date: 8/7/2021 3:48:00 AM
Congrats! thanks for sharing this... exposing your observant eyes, expressed by your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:11:00 PM
Aw, you are just too kind, Beata. Thanks so much.
Date: 8/6/2021 6:51:00 AM
LOL! A huge CONGRATS on your win, Milton. Janice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:11:00 PM
Thanks so much, Janice. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 8/6/2021 6:19:00 AM
Your staring paid off Milton lol, Back with congrats on your win. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. It was fun to write.
Date: 8/6/2021 5:51:00 AM
A big big congratulations to you. Thank you so much for submitting this wonderful piece for my contest. I feel so honoured reading this. Have a lovely day.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Funom. I really enjoyed writing it and am so pleased it found its way among your winners.
Date: 7/24/2021 12:39:00 PM
This is so so enjoyable to read... laughing all the way. Way to go, Milton.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/24/2021 2:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Marilene. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/23/2021 8:19:00 PM
Great description of different people and circumstances, in such varied scenarios. Well done Milton!!...ab
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/23/2021 8:46:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anselmo. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 7/23/2021 6:41:00 PM
Loved the ending rhymes! Great job, and what visuals!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/23/2021 7:59:00 PM
(chuckling) I figured you'd get a kick out of this one, Caren.
Date: 7/23/2021 1:13:00 PM
Great observations Milton you've been people watching, but you're right there's some odd characters about lol. Best of luck in the contest and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/23/2021 4:16:00 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. I enjoyed writing this one!
Date: 7/23/2021 10:10:00 AM
Wow Milton, such entertaining couplets. Of course one is allowed to stare, so long as you don’t get spotted… Belle
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/23/2021 11:04:00 AM
Oh, I do try to be inconspicuous. Thanks for your read and your comment, Belle.

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