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Stop Sign

I was driving fast,
I think I saw a stop sign.
Too bad. Too late now.
I'll just look for another,
And I'll stop for twice as long.

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Valsa George

Date: 11/25/2024 10:08:00 PM

I enjoyed the humor of it... Hilda. But be careful of speed. Once you miss the stop sign, you can't rectify your action, even if 'you stop twice as long'. Fortunately nothing happened...!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 11/25/2024 10:13:00 PM

Everyone makes mistakes. Even the poor girl in my poem. The stop sign should be reviewed to see if it is properly placed. Ha ha.

Joseph May

Date: 3/22/2024 5:26:00 PM

Speeding can make you miss the signs, and endanger others, Nicely penned

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 5/20/2024 8:46:00 AM

Being careful while driving is a good thing. Thank you for your comment.

Robert Schatz

Date: 3/5/2024 4:54:00 PM

I do this "making up for" stuff all the time. (I put this bottle in the trash can, not the recycling bin, so I'll pick up the next two bottles I see laying on the ground and put them in the recycling bin.) Also, really enjoyed your haiku(s) Hopeful Nature and Ghost Sale, as well as your senryu Football. I like all your poems I've read and will definitely read more. Cheers!

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 3/5/2024 5:32:00 PM

Thank you. With that, I'd better start writing. I've been in a holding pattern. I like your poetry, as well

Thama Logan

Date: 2/13/2024 2:43:00 PM

Hello Hilda, This poem made me smile as I have done this myself from time to time. Thank you for the lovely comment you posted regarding my poem. Blessings, Thama Logan

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 2/13/2024 3:58:00 PM

Thank you for reading my tanka. I hope you don't get a ticket. (See my poem titled Small Town Cop.)