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Stop Sign

Once I
saw my

shadow
follow

something
unseen

oh my!
cried I

come back
on track

but then
chagrin

it showed
side road

Sorry
Charlie!

saw sign
free wine!

old vine
sublime

made stop
no thought

you’d miss
remiss

amiss
kiss kiss

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Gershon Wolf Date: 1/22/2021 9:05:00 AM Those last four syllables gobsmacked me into cheshire cat smiles and hearty laughs. Very, very good!! Keep the humor coming, Linda. Smiles for miles, Gershon Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/22/2021 10:33:00 AM So glad I can spread a little humor gw.:) Life is short and laughter heals. kiss kiss ;), Linda

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/16/2021 8:09:00 AM Strange I thought that I had commented on this one. These are not easy but you have done well. Thanks for your visit. Sara Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/16/2021 8:48:00 AM Well I'm glad you commented again ;) Many thanks for the supportive comment! Linda

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/16/2021 5:53:00 AM beautiful rhyme and pace. I never did one of these. You did well. ~~ Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/16/2021 6:25:00 AM Hi Victor. Thanks for the read and visit. You should try one - they're kinda fun :)) Linda

Harry Horsman Date: 1/15/2021 9:39:00 PM Clever and ever so rhythmic. Love it. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/16/2021 6:18:00 AM Thank you Harry. You're welcome to stop by anytime! Linda

Chuck Melugin Date: 1/15/2021 7:11:00 AM Dear Linda, I reread you poetic gem! This is so creative! I wanted to return and say Amazing pen! I so appreciate your friendship! I apologize for my first comment! please forgive me. Sincerely, Chuck Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/15/2021 7:25:00 AM Hey Chuck! No apologies needed on my side. I enjoyed your first comment and now, this second lovely comment. :) Your friendship is welcomed! Many thanks for visiting and commenting! Linda

Peter Dome Date: 1/14/2021 2:19:00 PM Love it. great visuals well done. Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/14/2021 2:54:00 PM Hi Peter. Thanks for stopping by and commenting! Linda

Chuck Melugin Date: 1/14/2021 11:43:00 AM great word stack! Original with poetic bricks of beauty! uh o !! i ran the stop sign! Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/15/2021 7:24:00 AM Uh oh Chuck, better turn around :) Many thanks for the stop by and comments! Linda

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 1/14/2021 10:14:00 AM kiss kiss I love it, Linda. Be well and keep inspiring us with your lovely words Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/14/2021 2:53:00 PM Rose :) Thanks for the visit and nice comments! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/14/2021 8:22:00 AM - Well done, Linda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Linda Alice Fowler Date: 1/14/2021 10:11:00 AM Many thanks Anne-Lise :) hugs {} Linda