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Love ought to be passionate and on fire, fueling everlasting bonds of trust. And not the promises of a liar distorting love in the pursuit of lust. Feeling the tears building behind your eyes, your spirit sinks, scuttled by betrayal. For realizing what each drop implies, dreams collapse, and anxieties prevail. An unbearable pain pierces your heart as truth dispels the illusion of lies. And as doubt and mistrust tear it apart, depression dismantles trust till it dies. The broken promises you've endured were rife with outright deceit and pretense. And juvenile dreams that never matured spurred a catastrophic set of events. Like a river, destiny sets love's course, but you decide who will swim by your side. And when fate veers and heads towards remorse, change direction, though you're crying inside. (Quatrain) 3/15/2017

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/15/2018 8:11:00 PM

Strong images of compassion and hope, Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/16/2018 8:35:00 AM

Thank you very much Line, your support and kind words are very much appreciated my friend, Emile.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 3/21/2017 5:06:00 PM

Hello Emile,this is a powerful poem you wrote. Your message is loud and clear. I've been crying on the inside. So now I rally in hope. Like this poem.

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/22/2017 8:10:00 AM

Thanks so much Darlene, for your visit and kind words, Emile.

Wendy Rycroft

Date: 3/16/2017 4:31:00 AM

Wow a great poem Emile well written x

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/17/2017 12:09:00 PM

Thanks so much Wendy, for your visit and kind words, Emile.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/15/2017 9:20:00 PM

Emile, this is so heart felt and well one can feel the tears, well done!

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2017 9:33:00 PM

Thanks you Arthur, your kind words of support are most appreciated. Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/15/2017 5:53:00 PM

This entire poem has a profound depth that goes beyond understanding of most males. This is certainly impressive and a beautiful piece Emile! You are unique among men and your poetry is a treasure! A FAVE and a magnificent SEVEN! ; )

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2017 8:11:00 PM

Connie your words have touched my heart, thank you, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/15/2017 5:39:00 PM

Emile this poem has such powerful messages. So important. Very well written :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, your continued support is most appreciated. Emile.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2017 5:28:00 PM

So sad of a life to feel depressed because love.. it should never feel like that it should inspire and encourage... nicely done... ~*

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/15/2017 8:12:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve, I always look forward to reading your comments, Emile.