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Stone's tone has a husky timbre... that pulsates in the darkness. They reveal the origins of the earth... wildlife... and mankind... Stones can't lie... which provides for a unique and poignant perspective.
Written: September 29, 2021 Syllables checked by: HMS.COM Your Best Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 10/1/2021 12:21:00 PM
I especially liked this part "Stones can't lie.." and if they could, can you imagine what might happen? Another poem idea.
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Date: 9/30/2021 9:40:00 AM
Good job, Lasaad, and I believe it is absolutely true. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/30/2021 9:19:00 AM
Good thoughtful entry for the contest..Well done...Delice
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Date: 9/30/2021 5:52:00 AM
Great perspective, Lasaad. Very will written. All the best.
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Date: 9/30/2021 4:33:00 AM
Superb poetic structure, my dearest friend, Lasaad! Blessings
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Date: 9/29/2021 10:56:00 PM
So well done. You're a great poet.
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Date: 9/29/2021 7:56:00 PM
Yes we can learn so much, from what is all around us, and the fines on the moon and mars gives us wonderful clues. Great poetry, Lasaad.
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