Stones

Stones splash, splash
On the surface of the white snow waves of the sea
With horrendous, horrible hope
That whirls, whispers and whistles
The sonnets of love and belonging. 

Belonging, believing, love,
Such disease!
Disease with no cure,
Yet 
The terrible ailments are described as something so pure. 

What are stones to do?
The stones who splash. 
Don't they know what hope could do to them when they are meant to sink slowly 
Down 
      Down 
            Down
                And down. 


Forgotten 
                                   Lost 
Just stones. 

Belonging and love never belongs to stones,
Stones aren't gold. 
Diamonds choose gold. 
Stones just stay stones. 
      Just stones. 

Then why? Why? 
Such horrible hope of the disease that makes splashing happen?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/28/2025 7:01:00 AM
You are not a stone but getting stone -- never mind. Glad to see you posted. I've been checking on you for days. AND, I'm glad to feel the rage coming off the page. Let it out. So love and believing in love are a disease when love doesn't please, that same love will be a Nirvana feel when it is ready to deliver. This is great, loaded with 'rocking' metaphors' and, need I say, very emotive. I felt you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/25/2025 4:48:00 AM
Anne, I agree, such powerful imagery and a deep rooted metaphor! Much contemplation needed but I don't know where we'd be without hope! Indeed an incredible write!
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Date: 8/25/2025 1:45:00 AM
Stones always sink, and even when you try to make the stones skip across the other side of a river, they'll sink before they get across.... Amazing poem, that has your emotions on display.
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Date: 8/24/2025 7:51:00 AM
- It is often difficult to understand other people's feelings and intentions... you describe it with strength, Anne :) - hugs
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Date: 8/24/2025 5:32:00 AM
Wanting to be loved, wanting to belong, yet cast off like a stone thrown into the sea. Cold, alone, forgotten, valueless. Such a sad yet powerful poem Anne
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Date: 8/22/2025 5:04:00 PM
brilliant images, and metaphor, hope it is fictional wishes
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Date: 8/21/2025 1:33:00 AM
I have heard of kidney stones which are common. Hope you don't suffer from them although sometimes they can be removed. Great alliteration. Blessings.
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Date: 8/24/2025 5:30:00 AM
Victor, who knew you had a sense of humor?
Date: 8/20/2025 11:25:00 PM
Wow Anne what a beautifully powerful write….l love how you use stones to describe depression…. is a terrible debilitating disease that so many suffer from! Debx
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Date: 8/20/2025 11:23:00 PM
A deep and meaningful poem, Anne. Illness is just not always meant to be understood. I pray for comfort through the pain for all that are experiencing long tern illness. Many in my family have suffered before parting. I have been blessed to be 80 with no major medical problem so far. Peace and comfort my friend. Hugs, Bill
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