Stones

Skipping stones was a piece of cake The lake can be fun and calm without a wake One-two-three for me None for thee Every stone did not skip Sorry-you need more zip Date Written: 8/7/2021 Note: Acrostic Rhyme

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 8/10/2021 11:33:00 PM

GOOD. Well-done. All the best.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2021 11:35:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Have a blessed day...........................

Alkas Poetry

Date: 8/10/2021 1:07:00 AM

funny way to get calm stones skipping over a calm lake or sea, it requires zip and skill, i loved it dear, salute alkas

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/10/2021 8:51:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you love my stones skipping write. I guess it does take some "zip and skill." Have a blessed day...........................

Paul Callus

Date: 8/9/2021 2:47:00 AM

Both this cute poem and skipping stones are fun, Paula. Each time I go on a pebbly beach I find it hard to avoid the temptation :) ~ Regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/9/2021 9:25:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this cute/fun stone write. Glad I give you a good memory from your days at the beach. Have a blessed day...........................

Supraja Kannan

Date: 8/8/2021 10:16:00 PM

Very interesting, Paula... Enjoyed reading this cute piece...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/9/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this cute/fun write. Have a blessed day...........................

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 8/8/2021 5:17:00 AM

Could never get the hang of skimming a stone across water.. If this poem is entered into the Stones contest..Good luck for a win..Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/8/2021 10:26:00 AM

Thanks for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. I was never good at that stone water thing. Have a blessed day/week..............

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 8/8/2021 2:39:00 AM

Very amusing ...

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/8/2021 10:23:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun write. Hope I put a smile on your face. I love to do that. Have a blessed day/week..............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/7/2021 10:56:00 PM

A fun poem, Paula.. I was not good at this at all...Alas! You brought me back to my days in Chicago and summers is Wisconsin. Thank you so much Pangie

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/8/2021 10:22:00 AM

Thanks for writing. Glad you like this fun summer Stones write. I very never good at it but I love the water. Have a blessed day/week..............