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Stone Baked

Stone baked, these brownstone tenements reflecting Summer’s scorching sun absorbing humidity’s hubris laying wilt in heat’s distortion. Front stoops a refuge for the old a broken pipe respite for the young beach day of inner city slum children of the moment seizing fun Laughter splashing in life’s stream draws to its shores the joy of youthful now hot sidewalk’s dancing children jubilee a gift to fill a stoic parent’s dream Stone baked, these brownstone tenements at eve release a humid haze offering but a dismal, dampened sleep sun setting on the city kids “street-beach”. ©8/24/2017 Submitted to – Hot Summer Day – Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/18/2017 6:20:00 PM
congrats, John!
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Date: 9/18/2017 3:00:00 PM
An excellent write John, congrats :)
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Date: 9/18/2017 10:47:00 AM
Terrific write John, congratulations...
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Date: 9/17/2017 5:40:00 PM
Thank you, John, for entering my contest. you gave me a vision of children enjoying the heat because of an accidental broken pipe.... Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 8/27/2017 9:32:00 PM
Now THIS is very mature writing on the topic, John. Probably for me, the best I have seen yet.
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Date: 8/25/2017 2:30:00 AM
Kids make their own fun and your poem is proof they don't need the beach' I love your unique take on the scene John and like the repeated line and 'street beach' is a superb ending bringing the beach to the city. Makes me appreciate the golden beach 5 mins walk from me:-) hugs jan xx
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