Stone and Marshmallow Castles

Brick upon each brick I build
As I stack heavy stones one by one
Sweat and tears, love and fears
To create an earthly castle under the sun.

Damages by hurtful weather come,
Ravages against a fortress that was strong
With scrapped knees and promised pleas,
I feel defeated, do you hear my song

My sweet so sweet, little girl
With marshmallows, I will form
A castle complete, where we can meet
I wish to protect you from the storm

Like a father, you take my hand
Guiding me to our castle in the sky
No longer bound, to earth by stone
The world less daunting from on high

Look at the earth far down below
Above we're illuminated by the sun
The best part is your princess smile
 You open the drawbridge for everyone

With open arms you greet each child
Joy everlasting awaits each one
Within this castle, where the angels meet,
Built with love and warmed by the sun


A collaboration with Casarah Nance.
Thanks for inviting me to write, it was a pleasure.

Written August 7, 2015
By: Casarah Nance & Richard Lamoureux

For Shadow Hamilton's "Partner up" contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A. Sharma Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 1:17 AM
Wonderful collab Richard and Casarah! Congrats on superb win!
United Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Absolutely beautiful cas and Richard my congrats to you both:-) hugs Jan xx
A  Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 8:49 AM
Happy Birthday Richard :) Also,, Congratulations on your - Partner up - contest win. **SKAT**
Lamoureux Avatar
September 8, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Thanks for the birthday greeting SKAT.
Muideen Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 6:41 AM
A wonderful penned, it extreme excellence.........A.M.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 7:19 AM
Thanks A.M. ;0)
Ryerson Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 4:34 PM
Between you and Cas, you have created a true masterpiece Richard, one to be read many times over...I especially like the internal rhyming in line three of the first three verses. Totally in sync...
Lamoureux Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 7:21 AM
Thanks Tim, I enjoyed writing with Cas.
Nance Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 1:06 PM
Thank you for collaborating with me Richard, this turned out fantastic, you are such a treasure xx
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 2:40 PM
It was my pleasure, thanks for getting us started and providing the foundation on which to build. Have you posted it yet? Hugs Rick.
Nunez Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 9:17 AM
Great work you've done with Cas, Rick. Innocence and warmth, trust and being steadfast can be gleaned from your lines. A 7 . Congrats to both of you! hugs!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 10:12 AM
Thanks Kim for your thoughtful visit.
Devnath  Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:07 PM
Both you are great poets so this great poem penned with beautiful words. Nice collaboration my lovely friend. 7 ++, Loved always,bl
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Much appreciated BL.
Devnath  Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 2:06 PM
Both you are great poets so this great poem penned with beautiful poem. Nice collaboration my lovely friend. 7 ++, Loved always,bl
Muideen Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 9:39 AM
This write is extreme great, you penned it with vivid imagery and excellence.........A.M.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 10, 2015 at 9:10 AM
Thanks A.M.
Vaso Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 12:36 AM
Now this is amazing, other than Cas is cheating on me, but , never the less, amazing poem!!!!! great write you two!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:47 AM
Good morning Arthur, I'm pleased you like it.
Dietrich Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 12:02 AM
you two came up with a very precious poem. Loved the marshamallows which I envisioned as clouds. Way to go, you two.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Andrea, Casarah was easy to write with.
Pinet Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 4:14 PM
Both authors use good imagery and maintains a poetic flow through the whole piece giving it an ethereal feel. Emile.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:52 AM
Thanks Emile, mission accomplished!
La France Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 1:16 PM
Richard, so beautifully penned by both of you 7 and thanks for visiting my tribute poem
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:53 AM
You are most welcome Constance. Thanks for visiting and for giving us a seven.
Lindley Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 11:26 AM
Wonderful poem. Super 7 on this gem my friends!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2015 at 7:54 AM
Aww thanks Robert.;0)
Manassian Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 10:54 AM
Two great poets......how couldn't write be anything but fantastic.....lovely poem! Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 11:18 AM
Thanks Eileen, hugs Rick.
Widjanarko Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Stunning piece Rick! First stanza was so captivated! Loved it :) thank you for your previous visit Rick, it's been a while :p wishing you a great day there, hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 11:18 AM
You as well Sun Shine!
Hopper Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 8:05 AM
Absolutely lovely! Truly enjoyed soaking in these beautiful, flowing words!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 8, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Thanks for being the first to comment.
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