Stone

Stone My heart Is hard as Solid granite That formed with forces Great and fierce over time Like the force that shattered my Vulnerable, restless heart and Turned it as callous and as rigid As beaten, weathered, long eroded cliffs By Donna Golden December 6, 2007

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 8/16/2009 9:21:00 AM

This is a wonderful, awesome piece, I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. You are a great friend. Adeleke

Krista Kurth

Date: 8/15/2009 7:33:00 AM

Powerful imagery. I hope your heart is able to crack open sometime soon. All the best, Krista

James Fraser

Date: 8/11/2009 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Donna>>James

Diane Christian

Date: 8/11/2009 3:38:00 AM

a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane

Carrie Richards

Date: 8/10/2009 4:32:00 PM

Congratulations, Donna, on this featured work this week! Well done! ~ Carrie

Sue Mason

Date: 8/10/2009 3:15:00 PM

Powerful write here, Donna ... I feel your anger! Very well done and thanks to the PoetrySoup staff for selecting this wonderfully done Etheree to be featured this week !! Congratulations !!

Michael Jordan

Date: 8/10/2009 4:51:00 AM

Donna - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ

Brian Strand

Date: 8/9/2009 11:49:00 PM

Congrats on your feature poem this week Donna.rgds Brian

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/9/2009 1:18:00 PM

Stone= > a safety zone!!! Congratulations on being featured, Donna. Keep writing! DAS-J

Date: 8/9/2009 1:06:00 PM

Donna, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured this week to my other comment. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Date: 1/17/2009 2:39:00 PM

The creative imagery forwards your thoughts in this piece. Nice use of this challenging form. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/14/2009 11:42:00 PM

Lovely flow... not easy with this form. Marvelous language and imagery. Best wishes, Keith