Stoicism is the Key

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written for the stoicism contest sponsored by Sotto Poet

I never knew Stoicism is the name for most of what I truly believe until I saw this contest. 

In silence, when darkness 
envelopes the sky,
unlock the glass windows 
of your mind, 
forgive the stars
that veiled their silver,
for it is in times of 
confusion and calamity,
we paint our own
rose wine twilight,
that scintillates beyond
fleeting fog of time and sanity.

Sometimes, we forget to 
appreciate nature’s performance,
as life seems to be a 
black gold theatre of 
manipulative mantras. 
We rise as actors dressed in
dancing stripes of integrity,
pirouetting like a merry-go-round 
of lights, guiding our destiny. 
Where melodramatic monologues 
of melancholic laws
remain tucked away deep,
beneath a charismatic mattress 
woven across turquoise trampolines, 
of tranquil testaments and tiger lilies.


But as the curtains  swiftly fly 
into thin crimson layers of air,
trust the silence, for when 
everything’s louder,
we find contentment in 
compassionate places we encounter,
sowing seeds of love, whilst we hope;
brushing off negativity’s echoes,
to clutch onto inner healing’s rope,
and surrender to its throes.

So allow the invisible wand 
of your soul that sears
to sprinkle pixie-dust upon 
the backbone of cascading fears,
let your heartbeat ring 
and strum every 
metallic string of faith,
whilst thin veins in 
throbbing waves hum,
“Kindness is the healing
stone and stoicism is the key of life”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 11/30/2023 9:03:00 PM
Your writing is enticing, and definitely makes stoicism a desirable choice for a way to live. I admire those that can do it. I am too temperamental, too opinionated to manage it. I launch protest at the first sign of wrong doing or unfairness. Your contentment in the passionate places sounds wonderful Mistress, for those that can maintain it, it must be truly rewarding. Lovely poem.
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Date: 11/29/2023 9:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Stoicism As Way of Life" contest...great writing, Ink :) - hugs
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Date: 11/28/2023 8:02:00 PM
"we find contentment in compassionate places we encounter, sowing seeds of love, whilst we hope; brushing off negativity’s echoes, to clutch onto inner healing’s rope, and surrender to its throes." Through these beautiful lines you have nailed what's stoicism. Filling the heart with kindness, driving away all negativity and hoping for the best..... is the essence of a stoic view of life. "Forgive the stars that veiled their silver, for it is in times of confusion and calamity, we paint our own rose wine twilight," How true and I love these lines.
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Date: 11/28/2023 1:21:00 PM
Dear Ink, your contemplation on the stoic way of life, is truly profound. Your words are imbued with a gentle fluidity that brings solace to the heart. Your imagery and great word choice have earned a high placement in my contest. Hearty Congratulations on your well-deserved win
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:40:00 PM
Dear sotto im beyond pleased and honoured to be placed in your contest highly. Thank you for teaching so many about stoicism. I am grateful for the experience and so happy to learn. Thank you again
Date: 11/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
A powerful piece. I fully agree with the "healing stone."
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Date: 11/29/2023 1:39:00 PM
Thank you so much dear ormulyce for your visit and for your support. Appreciate it truly
Date: 11/28/2023 3:51:00 AM
you don't seem to have a soup mail can you soup mail me please so I can give you my email :)
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:03:00 AM
Iv sent you a soup mail sweet rose awwn im truly honored that you thought of me and left me such kind comments too. I appreciate your support always
Date: 11/28/2023 3:50:00 AM
omg , you dipped me in and left me there :)
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Date: 11/28/2023 3:50:00 AM
Kindness is the healing. You said the magic word girl !
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Date: 11/27/2023 5:57:00 PM
Another intricate and beautiful poem, I applaud this masterpiece.
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:04:00 AM
Awwn you are too kind sweet soul. Thank you so much hilda i appreciate you always being so supportive
Date: 11/27/2023 2:04:00 PM
I don't believe in the basic tenets of stoicism, but I certainly can applaud great poetry when I see it. I especially liked lines 6,7 stanza 2. I'm a bit of an actor myself
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:05:00 AM
Oh why? Haha i like your way of responding so sincerely. Thank you so very much always tomszy! Appreciate your support always
Date: 11/26/2023 9:24:00 PM
A beautiful way to express your thoughts on the life of a stoic, Ink. Your words flowed smoothly, and thoughts were comforting. Few have ever thought about the life of a stoic. I like your closing quote. Life would be better for most if they chose to live such a life. Great entry for the contest, my friend. Good luck! Your poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:06:00 AM
Thank you so much bill I learned alot about this from sara too she seems to know alot about stoicism. Thank you both for always being so supportive so grateful
Date: 11/26/2023 8:52:00 PM
Very pithy and delightful read! Have a nice day lovely Ink ~ AA
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:06:00 AM
Ah thank you AA so kind of you to visit and leave such supportive comments
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Date: 11/27/2023 2:01:00 PM
Ever so pithy!
Date: 11/26/2023 5:53:00 PM
A lot of wisdom in this, I epecially liked the part about Nature, and letting go of negativity... beautifully and wisely crafted! A gem!
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:09:00 AM
Awwn paige so kind of you and sweet. Thank you so very much for always being so supportive. I appreciate all that you do to lift me up
Date: 11/26/2023 3:39:00 PM
we find contentment in compassionate places we encounter, sowing seeds of love, whilst we hope; brushing off negativity’s echoes---well said, my friend. Meaningful, thoughtful, inspirational poem, Ink. Words echo enlightenment!
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:13:00 AM
Thank you always dear Vijay for being so supportive and kind i appreciate it so very much. Youve been so very generous always
Date: 11/26/2023 2:29:00 PM
Very beautiful. You are far better than I if stoicism is mostly what you believe. I think I only have half the characteristics of a stoic person! I bet this one scores high . Thanks for your thoughtful comments on my poems, Ink.
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:17:00 AM
Awwn yes i think alot of stoic principles actually go with what i believe and try to follow, somethings i still try to learn .. like patience..thank you for always being so kind and supportive
Date: 11/26/2023 11:10:00 AM
We are all actors on the stage of life and stoicism is part of that act, Well penned
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Date: 11/28/2023 6:30:00 AM
Ah thank you so much Joseph i appreciate your visits always
Date: 11/26/2023 10:24:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. It is very descriptive and has deep thought. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Keep on writing. Sara K
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Date: 11/26/2023 10:33:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Sara, i appreciate your support always truly, my pleasure too , visiting your page
Date: 11/26/2023 10:15:00 AM
An interesting take on Stoicism, i've not seen anyone else express it like you have.. You have a great way of building up to the theme, like your start where you set the scene... Always important in poetry... the opening lines are always the ones that grab the attention of the reader... You explain the philosophy of stoicism very well and mention all the positive points that arise from it.. there are many great lines in your poem, include metaphors as always... good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/26/2023 10:35:00 AM
I always think “ interesting” is not a good sign lolol i wrote this very quickly. In like 20 minutes. But guess i dont really try to be different sometimes my mind is a bit too hazy lol and you expect me to write a poem with no metaphors and similes that will be the hardest contest ill ever be trying . Lord have mercy. Thank u so much for your sweet support dear
Date: 11/26/2023 9:19:00 AM
when darkness envelopes the sky ..we paint our own rose wine twilight, oooo love these lines papi!!! melodramatic monologues of melancholic laws ..turquoise trampolines, of tranquil testaments and tiger lilies… mmm I love a siiiick alliterationszzzs!!! contentment in compassionate places we encounter,.. mmm amen to that child!! This piece flows so eloquently papi!! let your heartbeat ring and strum every metallic string of faith,.. I hear ringing!!! But dunno where it be comin from ae. XD
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Date: 11/26/2023 8:48:00 AM
Very enlightening… nice one as always
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