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Stoicism As Way of Life

"A gentle pat and soft voice comforts even the frighten beast." Quote_ by poet

How many children grow up thinking that abuse is the norm,
never complaining of what goes on in their home.
Like a 3-year-old boy being tossed and kicked repeatedly 
down a hallway of their building.  The abuse was caught 
on a doorbell camera. Her excuse was he, “wasn’t listening.”
 
blessed be the flower
charms those with its grace and scent
moral nourishment

I was brought up extremely old fashioned. You committed a sin,
you are accountable. I believe God lives within me.
With his hand on mine and wisdom He leads me in the right path.

learn to love yourself
forgiveness is thy freedom
you savor honey

I believe in loving people. I try very hard to respect those around.
Everyone has their boundaries what they have, what they choose,
and what they wish to do. They have their own believes,
don't aim to convert them, accept them for whom they are.

golden wheat long shaft
unspoiled nurturing kernel
those who hunger strength

11/7/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 9:24 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "Stoicism As Way of Life" contest...great writing, Eve :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 1:51 PM
Your contemplation on the stoic way of life is truly profound, Dear Eve. Your words are imbued with a gentle flow that brings solace. Congratulations on your well-deserved win
Rodgers Avatar
November 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Eve, your poem shines light on child abuse which is devastating and sad. I am a counselor by trade and work with trauma and breaks my heart. You offer a message of hope and affirmation. You remind us that we are all capable of love and forgiveness and should strive to accept ourselves and others for who we are. Your words are a beacon of light in a dark and hopeless world. - Blessings Daniel
Kingston Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 9:21 PM
My Catholic pastor would appreciate this special poem. Your lines are so meaningful and important. As a former kindergarten teacher, I have sadly had to call The Department of Children and Families twice. I especially enjoyed your 2nd and 5th stanzas and your words, " Moral nourishment" What a lovely write.
Baker Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:23 AM
I was raised in a similar way, Eve. Respect for others, whether alike or different from yourself, we were all created by the same God. We are all brothers and sisters. May our actions always come from Love. great poetry, Eve, a FAV for my list. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:27 AM
thank you, Bill, it touches my heart. Many blessings your way.
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 2:29 AM
- Eve, a wonderful poem for this theme ... it hits all the heartstrings ... "the old way" ... I wish we had more of it for our children today - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Empress Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 1:21 AM
Forgiveness is freedom, something i strongly believe in, sometimes we forgive not because someone else asked for it but because we deserve to let that go, to move forward, and i love how different your take on this prompt is. I have been thinkin of writing on this too, but iv never really heard of stoicism before. Pleasure reading this haibun! Goodluck in the contest
Roper Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 8:29 AM
Hello, Ink, I really wasn't sure what Lasaad is looking for, but this is what my mind led me too. Thank you so much.
Jones Avatar
November 7, 2023 at 12:49 AM
Engaging and full of wonderful witty word choices. Enjoyed
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