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Still Together

whirling spoon
in the teacup 
between twin silence

sweet jasmine
spreads its chest 
beside whispering

the afternoon sunny ray
touches the beautiful couple seats

the sweetest breeze 
smiling on the taciturn sights

positive everything
for the love and 
hails to greet it cordially

o’ you and me still together
in this evening light
under the starry night
for twin love in the merged heart



-April 30, 2019, Chattogram

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 5/10/2019 3:25:00 AM
Romantically beautiful my friend. Wow!
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Date: 4/30/2019 8:40:00 AM
Just love the imagery you've depicted in those first stanzas: I can smell the tea's aroma and that of the jasmine as well. Good-feel poem!! :) gw
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