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Still, Like the Rocks

The river’s water tumbled over the rocks Nature’s voice roaring, after the storm As a spray of mist splashed in the air I listen to its language and breathe fresh air Watching the waves, I stand sturdy like the rocks Near waterfalls of beauty spilling from the storm Powerful reminders, brought to me by the storm Now peace is in the calmness of the air The air is still, like these strong river rocks I am still with the rocks too, for the next storm, with each breath of air Heidi Sands 2/22/19 Placed 2nd in the Tritina for Messina Poetry Contest. Sponsor: Charles Messina

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Date: 2/24/2019 4:17:00 PM
Beautifully expressed Heidi, congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 2/24/2019 3:51:00 PM
Heidi, so many great poems entered in this contest and this is one of them. Congratulations on your win in my contest. Charlie
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 3:57:00 PM
Thank you very much Charlie. I appreciate your kind comment and support :)
Date: 2/24/2019 1:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thank you Sandy! :)
Date: 2/23/2019 9:54:00 PM
Truly beautifully done, Heidi! Best wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/24/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thank you very much Gershon :)
Date: 2/23/2019 11:43:00 AM
Peace follows nature's wrath and we stand in awe before its grandeur that only poetry like this can depict dearest, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/23/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thank you so much Demetrios :)
Date: 2/22/2019 4:21:00 PM
Beautiful, Heidi. Peace after the storm. We stand like rocks, sturdy. So well written.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2019 4:46:00 PM
Yes, it was peace after a storm we had. Thank you Sandy :)
Date: 2/22/2019 12:45:00 PM
how sweet is peace after a struggle, heidi... this is amazing!..huggs
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2019 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Nette! :)
Date: 2/22/2019 9:15:00 AM
Sometimes approaches we may take start off with a rocky start, then break apart we knew from the start.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thank you for your comment James :)
Date: 2/22/2019 7:46:00 AM
Very expressive is this poem..in the realm of nature. Best for a win, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/22/2019 7:48:00 AM
Thank you so much. That was my first Tritina and I found the form to be difficult to do . I appreciate your kind comment :)

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