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Still Life With Fruit

STILL LIFE WITH FRUIT

In spite of the orchard
A far white moon dominates
Its sick room presence lifts the eye

Still life with fruit –
Crescent dish with bananas, apples, pears -
A wrinkled bed spread falls off the sky

In all an angular canvas, 
A drowsy cubist squint,
Imposed shapes, lines – Picasso pie

This pointed, silver vase pokes through
Its ample gift of flowers,
Destroys the view – Oh, my!

I’ve come to, limp right arm yet hangs over,
Attendant tells, “Breakfast time. You hungry?
Let’s sit up. There! Good guy.”

Dave Austin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sirak Avatar
October 15, 2014 at 9:10 AM
You are amazing and so creative. Love the bedspread falling off the sky.
Yvonne Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:01 PM
I cared for my ailing parents and now just my mother. How sad we can not live out our lives whole. Love this poem.
Kendrick Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Cute one got a chuckle..Thanks for the visits to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
Devonshire Avatar
October 8, 2014 at 3:09 PM
Excellent use of contrast and I love the "Picasso pie" line. You always make me laugh. That last line sounds like something a person would say to a dog - "sit up, good boy," etc. If we keep our sense of humor, infirmity isn't nearly so bad. Love, Carolyn
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 5:31 PM
From beginning to end this poem drew me in Daver. This is so cleverly and creatively written. I hope you are feeling better today. Blessings, Connie
Onclaud Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 2:19 PM
delectably scribed, daver... a flavored write of the day!.. huggs
Kiser Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 1:35 PM
I favorite'd this.
A  Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 12:24 PM
Hi Daver, a very nice hang out, Enjoy your day, Love ~SKAT~
Gorelick Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 11:04 PM
Picasso pie..thats great! Hope your feeling better. I worry! BG
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 6:12 PM
oh my , Still Life has more than one meaning here. GREAT poetry, DAver, great imagery! and depressing!
Horne Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 3:37 PM
love the humour in this write, Daver. Hope you are well and having a good week, my friend
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