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Still Life

Slush of remaining snow
Mocks the glee of the day it fell
Like an old prostitute her first dream
Of maidenhood
The view doesn't move 
Fixed with rusty nails 
Of stars
And you say to yourself how nice it must have been 
For the ancients 
Thinking that the universe revolves around us
People gather in sheds
Cars, houses, clubs
On TV screens 
The President says something about a possible war
Quietly, without emotion 
Like telling us that tomorrow
He'll walk his dog
Undying others die
And unborn others are born
We speak of nonexistent things
And there are always things we don't talk about
Will we ever learn
The simple craft of living?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
May 1, 2012 at 8:33 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Contemporary" contest Betim. Love, Carol
Burton Avatar
July 27, 2008 at 1:43 AM
yEAH that was great its goin in mine too.hope to hear more from you WRITE ON
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