Still Hungry ( Spaces)

Birds flutter and fly Another disappointment

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/10/2010 4:24:00 AM

I encourage you to continue writing Barbara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. Wishing you the best in the contest should you enter it. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/10/2010 3:44:00 AM

sounds mysterious, very nice

Sean Kelly

Date: 2/10/2010 2:01:00 AM

So , top-up the crumbs on the bird table , Barbara . Clever piece and best of luck in the contest ...

Brian Strand

Date: 2/9/2010 11:34:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest BG.Rgds Brian

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/9/2010 5:49:00 PM

This is a broad statement.... WONDERFUL.... My thoughts: birds(haters) flutter and fly!!!.... Thought provoking write my friend.....:JP]