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still a game of clue

"still a game of clue" with every moment of love it is the sound of whispers between frozen impressions it is each glance and stare found entirely beyond shadows are secret pearls of promise held by desire and solid glare through all corners we journey you and I have chosen jewels carried between sun and moon within our world of it all it remains a game of clue SkyWatcher 11-29-23

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Bill Baker

Date: 12/2/2023 5:06:00 PM

A FAV for my list, Lisa. You are such a romantic, your love poems are always intriguing and heartfelt. I can see why you chose, "Sky Watcher" as your cute name. You use the heavenly bodies to convey love in many ways. Your closing verse says it all, it's still a game of clue. Smiles and Blessings my dear friend. Hugs, Bill

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/3/2023 7:08:00 AM

Hi Bill. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much for your gracious and generous intake and commentary along with mentioning SkyWatcher which makes me smile. I consider your review a gift. May today be a great day in every way. Blessings and Peace always to you and Sara. (smile)

Paul Bell

Date: 12/2/2023 2:35:00 AM

Love the intrigue running through your poem and the journey you present. Hope the journey continues for a long time.

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/3/2023 6:57:00 AM

Hi Paul. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much. Truly. I like your intake and commentary. Never do I take your visits for granted. May the journey continue a long time for one and all. Have a wonderful morning and day. I hope all is well. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Christina Bowring

Date: 12/1/2023 12:09:00 AM

Dear, sweet Lisa this is a truly stunning poem from the intriguing title right through to every gorgeous, poetic line. ‘ Are secret pearls of promise’ ‘ you and I have chosen jewels’- how divine! I love how you have creatively expressed and conveyed so well these tender feelings.It flows so well and captivates the reader. Loved it! Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent. Blessings and hugs to you xx

Lisa Ricci
Date: 12/1/2023 5:21:00 AM

Good Morning Christina. Hi. It is I who thanks you. Never do I take reviews commentary and visits for granted. Words do not express my appreciation for your most generous review and commentary. Truly. Thank you Christina. Have a beautiful morning and weekend too. Blessings and Peace always (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/29/2023 4:37:00 PM

the first two lines were so touching and heartfelt. I loved 'secret pearls of promise' -- so true of a loving relationship. I also liked 'through all corners we journey.' Such a soulful poem and read. Have to fave it. Hope you have a great evening, Sara

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/30/2023 4:05:00 PM

Dear Sara. Hi. A million thank yous. I do not take you or your reviews and commentary and intake. Thank you for telling me what you liked about the entry. I very much appreciate that. Truly. Now its my turn to say I hope you have a great evening. I'm usually on in the morning but things changed today. I will see you on your page. Please say hello to Bill. Peace and Blessings to you both always. (smile)

Ink Empress

Date: 11/29/2023 11:36:00 AM

Dear Lisa, it is always such a poetic privilege to be able to read your deep and seamless word weaving. I absolutely love the way you’ve woven this and how it flows in such a soulful manner. Theres so many lines that stood out for me in this but from all i mus highlight I absolutely love “ you and I have chosen jewels carried between sun and moon“ so captivatingly gorgeous! Those opening lines too are just so heartfelt and intriguing. Pleasure reading this, sending you light always

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/30/2023 4:01:00 PM

Hello Empress. Thank you Thank you Thank you. It is I who say it is a privilege turning to your page and extraordinary work. Truly. I do not take reviews commentary or visits for granted especially this one. I hope my work and I are worthy of your generosity. Have a beautiful night. Blessings and Peace always. (smile)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/29/2023 10:54:00 AM

Lisa, such wonderful phrases, images and metaphors! "You and I have chosen jewels." What a wonderful perception." Just one of many sprinkled throughout this verse. I am so glad I found this today. It has brightened my day. Gratitude to you for this poem. Sending you lovely blessings!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/30/2023 3:49:00 AM

Good Morning Sam. I am beyond honored by your review and commentary to which I do not take for granted. Thank you Thank you. Truly. It is my hope my entry and work deserve your generosity. Allow me to say you have made my day this morning with such a review. Blessings back to you thank you for that. Have a wonderful morning and day. Keep enjoying poetry and poetrysoup too (smile) Peace...

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/29/2023 7:35:00 AM

The never ending mystery of love Lisa. I wonder will we ever know the answers. Hope you're keeping well. Been in hospital for a spinal op but home now recovering. Tom

Lisa Ricci
Date: 11/29/2023 7:47:00 AM

Dear Tom. Hello. Believe it or not I was just about to go to your page because I just learned you had back surgery. I'm so very sorry for that. Please know be patient because it is a process for the healing and remember body mechanics of straight lines along with movements do not have to be fast just as long as you move but slow and steady as not to cause pain or inflammation. I know this all to well. I'm also sorry for being out of the happenings with everyone here. May today be a better day. Peace and Blessings always along with good health. (smile) PS - Thank you so much for taking the time to visit my page Tom. Be good to yourself.