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Still - Again - I See

Haunted by my haunts so long ago, I look deep... before the morning to let it go forever the pain of remembering ______________________________

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Date: 7/20/2013 10:06:00 AM

Rick, congrats on your win with this well written tanka! Love, Kim

Date: 7/19/2013 7:23:00 PM

Hi Rick, a sweet congratulations in Francine Roberts " 5 or less contest.... :-) LINDA

Date: 7/19/2013 8:42:00 AM

Rick, ... congrats! ~SKAT~

Date: 7/19/2013 1:13:00 AM

Congrats for your win with this one. I think it is an outstanding entry for the topic.

Date: 7/18/2013 10:13:00 PM

congrats Rick on your 4th place win in the 'serious" portion of the contest

Date: 6/20/2013 10:31:00 PM

Came back to see if you punctuate your tanka or not and I see you do a bit. Thinking how deep this is seeing it the second time.

Date: 6/6/2013 10:15:00 PM

Rick, thank you for supporting my contest... Congratulations! love~ Linda

Date: 6/6/2013 6:12:00 PM

rick, it's been a while since I have seen you posting!! Glad to see this last one you had put up. You have always excelled in these kinds of forms.

Date: 5/13/2013 10:36:00 AM

Very deep and nice. Thanks for being my 1st commenter. love manel

Date: 4/21/2013 10:29:00 PM

nice... always a fan...pd