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"stethoscope My What ?"

The room will be cold, but all that will change These rumors I'm told are all prearranged If the Doc asks you to cough, explain the female race If he says "Your kidneys got rocks" keep a straight face If he's younger than you don't be amazed Their people too, now the X rays! Hold still, not to move I can solemnly approve Imagine being called back for a redo

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/26/2010 8:34:00 AM
Oi! Mitch, hello & congratulation for having your poem featured this week . It is an awesome poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/23/2010 12:22:00 PM
Oh Mitch so funny... he was my boss for 18 years.. and we just kept taking it to the next level higher and higher.. and after his divorce we finally made it to the mountaintop..luv.. but such a funny cute comment.. Gondola..driver..luv it.. we did not get to Venice ...too far out of our way.. we are in Calabria... now.. leaving this Wednesday.. have to fly to Mississippi to see my son who had emergency surgery in Iraq.. now back in USA..luv..
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Date: 8/23/2010 10:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mitch. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2010 6:09:00 AM
congrats on the featured poem!!
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Date: 8/22/2010 7:34:00 PM
oh, I think the contest was not judged when I saw this earlier. congratulations! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:34:00 PM
You know---takes a nut to know one!! ;) Have you finished your work?
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:08:00 PM
Congrats Mitch on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all my friend.. I am now officially the new Mrs. "Sweetheart" as this is my wedding day/night..luv.. ciao..
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Date: 8/22/2010 5:02:00 AM
Funny for sure! Hits the nail right on the head, Mitch!...I have had 'kidney rocks' in the past. One was a whopper!...No sleep for 3 days! Worst pain I ever felt...finally went to the doc and had that sucker zapped! Congrats to you on the win - Tim
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:32:00 AM
the last line was perfect, Mitch. Hey why did you say OMG about Dr. Kildaire. Didn't you know??
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Date: 8/21/2010 12:17:00 PM
Great rhyme here. Congrats on your win and thanks for yours.
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Date: 8/20/2010 9:10:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Mitch
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Date: 8/20/2010 4:12:00 PM
Congratulations, Mitch, on your fourth place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/20/2010 12:38:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 8/20/2010 11:10:00 AM
Congrats, Mitch. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/20/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mitch in Carolyn Devonshire's "Doctor Phobia! Quick Contest". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2010 9:07:00 AM
Congrats Mitch on your win in the doctor contest with this great write.. ciao with luv..
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Date: 8/20/2010 8:55:00 AM
The younger doctors can't compare to my old, retired doctor who even made a house call when needed, Mitch. Enjoyed the humor in your poem. Many of the Soup's best humor writers provided a lot of laughs. There were many great entries and it was hard ranking them as each one gave me a laugh. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/19/2010 6:24:00 PM
funny poem! I just had several redo Xrays it is not uncommon!
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Date: 8/19/2010 4:50:00 PM
A WoNDERFUL PoEM 2 READ, tAKE CARE & ENJOY YoUR SELF*luv~SKAT
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Date: 8/19/2010 8:31:00 AM
:) Thanks for supporting the contest, Mitch. Could you make it 10 lines instead of 12? Love, Carolyn
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