Sterile Sermons

An old church stands with a spired steeple
Amidst the townspeople at Fox and Main
Where the hypocrites pray for sinful souls
And clergy holds sermons that entertain.
Within this sanctuary lined with pews
And opalescent glass and glittering gold
Odoriferous breaths of morning booze
Betray inebriants among the fold.
The Sunday sermon lectures temperance
Its message they heard many times before
The spoken words make no difference
Because people don’t heed them anymore.
The pimps and sots, sinners all congregate
Buying forgiveness while passing the plate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
September 26, 2009 at 10:36 AM
Albert, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 25, 2009 at 11:10 PM
Congrates on your poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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September 25, 2009 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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September 24, 2009 at 5:01 PM
Powerful writing! Best wishes in the next round. , Albert. Lainie
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September 24, 2009 at 1:55 PM
Albert, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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September 24, 2009 at 1:26 PM
Congrats! Love Light Truth Patricia
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 9:40 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Albert.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
Mason Avatar
June 27, 2009 at 11:02 AM
LOL wonderful writing here, Albert !! I love the "odoriferous breaths" and the "opalescent glass" .... AWESOME use of language and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week! Congratulations and Welcome to PoetrySoup!! I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.
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June 25, 2009 at 10:39 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Albert. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2009 at 8:54 AM
Congrats again on the re-feature. Vince
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June 23, 2009 at 1:11 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. Ernilando
Brown Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 1:53 PM
good poem, congratz on having your poem being featured! God bless you
Jordan Avatar
June 22, 2009 at 7:17 AM
Albert - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
Jordan Avatar
June 13, 2009 at 10:52 AM
Albert - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
Fraser Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>James
Martin Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 10:57 AM
congrats for being featured this week. this is a great write. take care.
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June 9, 2009 at 7:19 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. You are such a wonderful poet. Keep your pen dancing to the drum beat of your heart and art. Adeleke
Austin Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 6:40 AM
Congrats on this selection. No wonder I stay away from church. daver
Christian Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 2:59 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, I think that old church would need to re vamp their sermons to be up to date, we can not buy our way into heaven or obtain a ticket, some churches are old and do things the same for years so the water then becoems stagnent they would need to make fresh living water flow for the scriptures to come alive once again, A very powerful poem and well said lets hope it opens many eyes and minds to be open to change to do God's will. God bless you from diane
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June 8, 2009 at 12:36 PM
A reminder that faith isn't bought in a pew; it's a way of life. The vivid images convey your thoughts in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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June 8, 2009 at 9:24 AM
Congrats Albert on your sonnet being featured. Vince
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June 8, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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