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Sterile Sermons

An old church stands with a spired steeple Amidst the townspeople at Fox and Main Where the hypocrites pray for sinful souls And clergy holds sermons that entertain. Within this sanctuary lined with pews And opalescent glass and glittering gold Odoriferous breaths of morning booze Betray inebriants among the fold. The Sunday sermon lectures temperance Its message they heard many times before The spoken words make no difference Because people don’t heed them anymore. The pimps and sots, sinners all congregate Buying forgiveness while passing the plate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/26/2009 10:36:00 AM
Albert, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/25/2009 11:10:00 PM
Congrates on your poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne
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Date: 9/25/2009 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:01:00 PM
Powerful writing! Best wishes in the next round. , Albert. Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:55:00 PM
Albert, Congratulations on getting through the first round of the poetry contest with your great verse! Luck and love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2009 1:26:00 PM
Congrats! Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/24/2009 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through the first round Albert.Wishing you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/27/2009 11:02:00 AM
LOL wonderful writing here, Albert !! I love the "odoriferous breaths" and the "opalescent glass" .... AWESOME use of language and a very well-deserved selection to be a feature this week! Congratulations and Welcome to PoetrySoup!! I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.
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Date: 6/25/2009 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week Albert. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/25/2009 8:54:00 AM
Congrats again on the re-feature. Vince
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Date: 6/23/2009 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured. Ernilando
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Date: 6/22/2009 1:53:00 PM
good poem, congratz on having your poem being featured! God bless you
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Date: 6/22/2009 7:17:00 AM
Albert - I just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on having your poem featured this week – many blessings to you and those who share your heart – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/13/2009 10:52:00 AM
Albert - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/9/2009 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured>James
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Date: 6/9/2009 10:57:00 AM
congrats for being featured this week. this is a great write. take care.
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Date: 6/9/2009 7:19:00 AM
Congrats on your wonderful poem being featured this week. You are such a wonderful poet. Keep your pen dancing to the drum beat of your heart and art. Adeleke
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Date: 6/9/2009 6:40:00 AM
Congrats on this selection. No wonder I stay away from church. daver
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Date: 6/9/2009 2:59:00 AM
congratulations on your poem being featured, I think that old church would need to re vamp their sermons to be up to date, we can not buy our way into heaven or obtain a ticket, some churches are old and do things the same for years so the water then becoems stagnent they would need to make fresh living water flow for the scriptures to come alive once again, A very powerful poem and well said lets hope it opens many eyes and minds to be open to change to do God's will. God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/8/2009 12:36:00 PM
A reminder that faith isn't bought in a pew; it's a way of life. The vivid images convey your thoughts in a powerful way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 6/8/2009 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Albert on your sonnet being featured. Vince
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Albert. Love, Carol
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