Steps

Take them up a bit Step down and disconnect yet Well oriented Follow the rhythm Fall into run, then schism Palladium's glow Hang on, two flights left Three ahead then go right Welcome home, goodnight All this time, and the elevator still remains 'Out of Order.'

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2012 4:11:00 AM

Hi TIm, stopping by to say good night~PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2012 7:27:00 PM

haha, Tim, I love the ending of this. And how the elevator is still out of order. thanks for your comment. I love writing sonnets, I do.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/17/2012 2:56:00 PM

you make me rave, tim... a collection of delight and surprises... into the winners' list!!.. fantastic!..:) huggs!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/16/2012 5:48:00 AM

Good one..Got a chuckle and don't know if you intended it to be funny...Thanks for stopping by..I appreciate the little note about me leaving out a word in my work "Corrosion And Rust"...I wrestled with that line for I was trying to a count of 8,6,8,6..I tried all kinds of ways to make it work so I left it without the I or we....I figured the human mind would say I or we should be there..Thanks again..Sara

Tim B
Date: 4/16/2012 11:56:00 AM

I did intend a chuckle :). Yes, on your poem I did surmise that you may have done it on purpose, but thought I would make sure. You are right though, the mind does generally interpret the word as being there. Thanks for stopping by.

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 4/16/2012 4:31:00 AM

Nice piece! ;0) xoxo - Laila

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/16/2012 2:14:00 AM

Wow great write.