Stepping Into Twilight

All year I wait- anticipate the 
rusting of the leaves.....the
mad disorder of them blowing
filling up the eaves
I long to brace against the chill
with woodsmoke in the air.
and walk these orange corridors
where all the trees are bare.

As I step this cushioned path at year’s end 
suddenly aware of time that’s gone
I’m thankful for the wisdom to endure
all that winter and heaven may be holding. 

Fall into Fall
Written 9/19/19
Contest Judged:  9/22/2019 3:44:00 PM
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke 
3rd. Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gauthier Avatar
May 28, 2021 at 8:18 PM
Beautiful. Autumn is my favorite season so this poem really resonates with me ~
Dietrich Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 6:49 PM
this is gorgeous writing. I see you got a win. It was very well deserved and I hope you placed high. Congrats!
Delaney Avatar
September 26, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Thanks so much Andrea:I get easy inspiration from Autumn. Looking to spend more time for writing in November. It is a treasured goal. Hugs, SuZ
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Suzanne congratulations on your win in the contest!
Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 5:47 PM
Thanks so much Constance. Your comment is so welcome. SuZ
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 12:50 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, SuZ :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Delaney Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 5:48 PM
Hi Anne-Lise: love this time of year. Such a beautiful time. Thanks for stopping by. Hugs, SuZ
Mcgee Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:34 PM
this is a lovely tribute to fall. especially loved the stanza "I long to brace against the chill with wood smoke in the air."
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Hi Jeannie: Thanks for your lovely comment, hugs, SuZ
Chiri Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 1:44 AM
Congratulations on your placement!;)
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thanks Brenda.
Mays Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Lovely and poignant again. I'm glad you're still at it.
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:04 PM
Thanks so much, Carol.
Callus Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 5:40 PM
Falling into fall!! Such beauty and feeling in anticipation of autumn, Suzanne...a fitting prelude to approaching winter: such is life! Now you make me want to go listen to Bach's Prelude No 1 https://youtu.be/DmAqK2Z_rPs?t=38 Warm regards and hugs // paul
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:11 PM
Great to see you, Paul: Thanks for the link to Bach’s Prelude. Best always, SuZ
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2019 at 1:31 PM
I love the metaphor of time alluding to our approaching winter years. You have described autumn with breath taking beauty SuZ! I am sure this gem will be on the winner's list. It is simply gorgeous! xxoo
Delaney Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:09 PM
Thanks Connie Your encouragement always means so much, Love, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 8:14 AM
WOW! This is a brilliant write, SuZ..evoking life amid autumn..great imagery throughout!!
Delaney Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Hi Vijay: So thankful for your encouragement always. I have had a bad fall recently but healing with rest. Thankful for your friendship. SuZ
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