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Stelliferous Arc

Stelliferous arcs, of chiffon-sewn cosmic chains and rose-glazed silk yarns, a tapestry of crystal- love-tendrils on eden's heart.

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/15/2024 3:04:00 PM

I've seen some of your very positive comments made to other poets. You are a very kind person! This poem is beautiful. We write about completely different subjects, but that is all in fun. I had never heard the word stelliferous before this poem, so on top of all you improved my vocabulary. At first I was thinking ferris--related to iron. Thank you for being a kind presence on this site!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/29/2023 2:56:00 AM

I suppose I read all your poems but not the first you wrote which is a masterpiece of poetic writing. So glad to see you writing here. Blessings.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/31/2023 5:36:00 AM

An ethereal write. What a wonderful first piece.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/26/2023 10:22:00 AM

Hi Hiya! You definitely made an impact with this your first poem on Soup! Short but poetically delightful. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award! ~ Regards // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/23/2023 1:22:00 PM

I wonder if, the beauty of Eden was much like the color and design of the cosmos. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your nice visit to my page. Sara

A. Ormulyce

Date: 8/23/2023 5:04:00 AM

I like tanka. You've written a beautiful one.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/22/2023 3:55:00 AM

I do love this stellarly :-) created poem. The last line captured my soul. Congrats on POTW

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 1:17:00 AM

Awwn, you're just so sweet and I'm so elated to know that you love this tanka, I'm beyond grateful to you for your kindness.. :)

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 8/21/2023 11:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/22/2023 2:14:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, I'm beyond elated and very grateful! An honour that I deeply cherish!!!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/21/2023 8:57:00 PM

On clouds of cotton you belong, while your words softly sway, to a savory serenade. My heart is smiling, Hiya. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 1:20:00 AM

"On clouds of cotton you belong" You surely enchanted my heart and melted my soul with such magical and charismatic words.. "While your words swiftly sway, to a savory serenade" My gosh, what can ever be more beautiful than to receive such mystical words of praise from such a gorgeous poetess, thank you so much dear, you made my heart glow! And I'm happy, that my words made your heart smile :)

Tom Woody
Date: 8/22/2023 5:37:00 AM

Ooh I like that poetic comment

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/21/2023 6:39:00 PM

OMG, I'm on cloud nine and over the moon, swirling in galaxies of magical bliss, this came as such a beautiful surprise!! To be honoured amongst such brilliantly talented poets and to have my poem being regarded as POTD, this is a blessing.. I'm speechless. Thank you so much Poetrysoup community for giving me so much love and support, as a very new member here, I didn't imagine it to be this ethereal! I'm grateful to everyone here, sending love & light~ Hiya :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/21/2023 6:38:00 PM

So very beautiful, Hiya, Congratulations on POTD!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 1:18:00 AM

Awwn, thank you so much for your heartwarming words and kindness, dear, I'm grateful!!

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/21/2023 5:05:00 PM

You color my world, Hiya, spreading so much love and joy. Congratulations on POTD! Your poetry, let us all be in such chains!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/22/2023 2:35:00 AM

Awwn, this is the sweetest comment, made my heart smile with pure bliss! Thank you so much my dear, Anaya, you're so kind.. I'm beyond grateful for your ethereal support, in awe of your brilliant poems as well- sending love - Hiya :)

Arlo Parker

Date: 8/21/2023 3:53:00 PM

This picture is vibrant, provoking. Lovely POTD indeed, Hiva. :o)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 1:17:00 AM

Awwn, thank you so much for your ethereal and heartwarming words, I'm so grateful that you like this tanka! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/21/2023 3:46:00 PM

Congrats on receiving POTD on this fine Tanka my friend. Such poetic language must come a masterful pen! Great imagery. God bless..

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 1:16:00 AM

Thank you so much for your precious and kind words, I'm so elated that you like my tanka, truly means a lot! So grateful for your beautiful support.. Feeling blessed to be here in this lovely community!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 8/21/2023 2:45:00 PM

A gorgeous pen, Hiya, Enjoy the honors of a POTD ‘))) Pangie

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/23/2023 12:04:00 AM

Thank you so much dear, Pangie, I'm so elated to receive your heartwarming words, beyond grateful! - Hiya :)

Mark Toney

Date: 8/21/2023 2:11:00 PM

Hiya, I’m returning to congratulate you on receiving the honor of Poem of the Day!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 11:15:00 PM

Oh wow, so kind of you, thank you so much! This honour of POTD truly made my heart glow with joy! Definitely grateful for all your beautiful support~

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/21/2023 1:34:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Hiva and congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this beautiful Tanka poem… Belle

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/22/2023 2:03:00 AM

Thank you so much dear Belle, you're so kind and I'm beyond grateful for this heartwarming comment, truly feeling blessed to be in this beautiful community~

Silent One

Date: 8/21/2023 10:16:00 AM

So nice to see you here and congratulations on POTD, a great achievement for a new poet... Your tanka is full of imagery and you have used your word so well..

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 11:14:00 PM

It feels so nice to be here, honestly! I never imagined that I will be receiving so much love and support here, it all feels magical, especially the honour of POTD. I'm thankful to You, Ink and Tom, for your beautiful support, always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/21/2023 9:31:00 AM

- Just as beautiful today, Hiva ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 11:12:00 PM

Awwn, you're so kind, dear! I'm truly thankful to you for your precious support and beautiful words.. Sending love & hugs - Hiya :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2023 9:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. "Welcome to Poetry Soup" A lovely Tanka write. Have a blessed away writing away.................

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 11:11:00 PM

Awh, thank you so much for the sweet welcoming words and your kind appreciation! I feel so blessed to be amongst such brilliant people.. Such an honour it is! Love~ Hiya :)

Bill Baker

Date: 8/21/2023 9:05:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Hiya. Love the imagery in your Tanka. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 11:10:00 PM

Awwn, thank you so much for the warm welcome and kind wishes, I'm beyond elated by receiving such a beautiful honour, indeed. As a new member, receiving such magical support from everyone, truly means the world to me~ I'm grateful!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/21/2023 8:24:00 AM

Congratulations for POTD :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 7:23:00 PM

Awwn, thank you so much dear Heidi, you're very kind, I'm grateful for your lovely support!! :)

John Hamilton

Date: 8/21/2023 8:07:00 AM

Congrats on your potd, welcome to the soup.

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 7:21:00 PM

Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for your kind words, I'm grateful~ :)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 8/21/2023 7:14:00 AM

Your words radiate pure magic and intense emotion dear Hiya !! Big hugs and big congratulations on your amazing POTD ! You shine so bright ! Susan :)

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 7:22:00 PM

Awwn, dear Susan, I'm so euphoric that you liked my tanka, thank you so much for your very kind words! I'm beyond grateful for yours and everyone's magical support, being a new member, this came in as a surprise!! ~ Hiya :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/21/2023 6:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD honors for this lovely work magically woven of celestial delight! Enjoy your day!!!

Hiya Sharma
Date: 8/21/2023 7:20:00 PM

Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words, this is definitely delightful for me.. As a new member in this community, I feel blessed to receive such lovable support~