Stelliferous Arc

stelliferous arcs, of chiffon-sewn cosmic chains and rose-glazed silk yarns... a tapestry of crystal ~ love-tendrils on eden's heart...
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Beaufort Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 3:04 PM
I've seen some of your very positive comments made to other poets. You are a very kind person! This poem is beautiful. We write about completely different subjects, but that is all in fun. I had never heard the word stelliferous before this poem, so on top of all you improved my vocabulary. At first I was thinking ferris--related to iron. Thank you for being a kind presence on this site!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 2:56 AM
I suppose I read all your poems but not the first you wrote which is a masterpiece of poetic writing. So glad to see you writing here. Blessings.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 5:36 AM
An ethereal write. What a wonderful first piece.
Callus Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:22 AM
Hi Hiya! You definitely made an impact with this your first poem on Soup! Short but poetically delightful. Congratulations on p.o.t.d. award! ~ Regards // paul
Kendrick Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:22 PM
I wonder if, the beauty of Eden was much like the color and design of the cosmos. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your nice visit to my page. Sara
Ormulyce Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 5:04 AM
I like tanka. You've written a beautiful one.
Meadows Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Sharma  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:14 AM
Thank you so much dear, I'm beyond elated and very grateful! An honour that I deeply cherish!!!
Nicole Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:57 PM
On clouds of cotton you belong, while your words softly sway, to a savory serenade. My heart is smiling, Hiya. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:20 AM
"On clouds of cotton you belong" You surely enchanted my heart and melted my soul with such magical and charismatic words.. "While your words swiftly sway, to a savory serenade" My gosh, what can ever be more beautiful than to receive such mystical words of praise from such a gorgeous poetess, thank you so much dear, you made my heart glow! And I'm happy, that my words made your heart smile :)
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:39 PM
OMG, I'm on cloud nine and over the moon, swirling in galaxies of magical bliss, this came as such a beautiful surprise!! To be honoured amongst such brilliantly talented poets and to have my poem being regarded as POTD, this is a blessing.. I'm speechless. Thank you so much Poetrysoup community for giving me so much love and support, as a very new member here, I didn't imagine it to be this ethereal! I'm grateful to everyone here, sending love & light~ Hiya :)
Downing  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:38 PM
So very beautiful, Hiya, Congratulations on POTD!
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:18 AM
Awwn, thank you so much for your heartwarming words and kindness, dear, I'm grateful!!
Anaya Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 5:05 PM
You color my world, Hiya, spreading so much love and joy. Congratulations on POTD! Your poetry, let us all be in such chains!
Sharma  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:35 AM
Awwn, this is the sweetest comment, made my heart smile with pure bliss! Thank you so much my dear, Anaya, you're so kind.. I'm beyond grateful for your ethereal support, in awe of your brilliant poems as well- sending love - Hiya :)
Parker Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:53 PM
This picture is vibrant, provoking. Lovely POTD indeed, Hiva. :o)
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:17 AM
Awwn, thank you so much for your ethereal and heartwarming words, I'm so grateful that you like this tanka! :)
Lindley Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 3:46 PM
Congrats on receiving POTD on this fine Tanka my friend. Such poetic language must come a masterful pen! Great imagery. God bless..
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 1:16 AM
Thank you so much for your precious and kind words, I'm so elated that you like my tanka, truly means a lot! So grateful for your beautiful support.. Feeling blessed to be here in this lovely community!
Romios Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:45 PM
A gorgeous pen, Hiya, Enjoy the honors of a POTD ‘))) Pangie
Sharma  Avatar
August 23, 2023 at 12:04 AM
Thank you so much dear, Pangie, I'm so elated to receive your heartwarming words, beyond grateful! - Hiya :)
Toney Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:11 PM
Hiya, I’m returning to congratulate you on receiving the honor of Poem of the Day!
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:15 PM
Oh wow, so kind of you, thank you so much! This honour of POTD truly made my heart glow with joy! Definitely grateful for all your beautiful support~
Edmonds  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Hiva and congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day with this beautiful Tanka poem… Belle
Sharma  Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 2:03 AM
Thank you so much dear Belle, you're so kind and I'm beyond grateful for this heartwarming comment, truly feeling blessed to be in this beautiful community~
One Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:16 AM
So nice to see you here and congratulations on POTD, a great achievement for a new poet... Your tanka is full of imagery and you have used your word so well..
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:14 PM
It feels so nice to be here, honestly! I never imagined that I will be receiving so much love and support here, it all feels magical, especially the honour of POTD. I'm thankful to You, Ink and Tom, for your beautiful support, always!!
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 9:31 AM
- Just as beautiful today, Hiva ... congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:12 PM
Awwn, you're so kind, dear! I'm truly thankful to you for your precious support and beautiful words.. Sending love & hugs - Hiya :)
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. "Welcome to Poetry Soup" A lovely Tanka write. Have a blessed away writing away.................
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:11 PM
Awh, thank you so much for the sweet welcoming words and your kind appreciation! I feel so blessed to be amongst such brilliant people.. Such an honour it is! Love~ Hiya :)
Baker Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 9:05 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Hiya. Love the imagery in your Tanka. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 11:10 PM
Awwn, thank you so much for the warm welcome and kind wishes, I'm beyond elated by receiving such a beautiful honour, indeed. As a new member, receiving such magical support from everyone, truly means the world to me~ I'm grateful!
Sands Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:24 AM
Congratulations for POTD :)
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:23 PM
Awwn, thank you so much dear Heidi, you're very kind, I'm grateful for your lovely support!! :)
Hamilton Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 8:07 AM
Congrats on your potd, welcome to the soup.
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for your kind words, I'm grateful~ :)
Lawrence Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Your words radiate pure magic and intense emotion dear Hiya !! Big hugs and big congratulations on your amazing POTD ! You shine so bright ! Susan :)
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:22 PM
Awwn, dear Susan, I'm so euphoric that you liked my tanka, thank you so much for your very kind words! I'm beyond grateful for yours and everyone's magical support, being a new member, this came in as a surprise!! ~ Hiya :)
Gentile Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:37 AM
Congratulations on your POTD honors for this lovely work magically woven of celestial delight! Enjoy your day!!!
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind words, this is definitely delightful for me.. As a new member in this community, I feel blessed to receive such lovable support~
Pandit Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:10 AM
A warm welcome to a gifted poet! BIG congrats on your POTD, Hiya. I am in awe of your ornate words in this beautiful poem. A well deserved recognition!
Sharma  Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 6:57 PM
Awwn, thank you so much for your kind and wonderful words, I'm feeling so blessed to be amongst such beautiful poets and poetesses.. And receiving such magical support, fills my heart with joy! Truly grateful~
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