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Stealing From a Goddess

STEALING FROM A GODDESS At Dawn I wait Beside the sea Under the tree Behind the dunes For his arms. Mesmerized by colors without confines of name I stand By the mirrored waves— Bronzed by Dawn’s immortal dazzling eye-- My Beloved’s smile Goddess bruise-kissed brilliant Looks up Still shy-- but painted guilty In unfamiliar splendor-- God-like himself Ignited by a bronze lit blaze. I do not turn to face him— but look-- water down--devour His beloved smile Insistently appealed forgiveness-- Dimples-- flashing his secrets, seek me from the rippling water-- Suddenly Breaking through the brilliance Encasing me in warm muscled arms which escape the mad reflection. Faintly in my ear flickers Delicate-- but Jealous-- moans-- The Morning Goddess, Helpless, She, Pulled once again into timeless sandy dunes-- Aurora’s seaside prison hideaway 'Til Twilight Beside the sea Under the tree Behind the dunes We love. (In throes of wildest passion there lingers the delicious thought— Stealing from a goddess Is a rare-- but heady-- morsel.) Aug 12 2013©

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Date: 9/5/2013 3:48:00 PM
Victoria, well done...Linda
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 9/11/2013 2:56:00 PM
Thanks Linda..as I have said before, I always appreciate that you take the time to comment and read. V
Date: 9/5/2013 1:12:00 PM
Great creative unique work..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2013 2:55:00 PM
thanks Sara for being a faithful reader...sorry I have not been able to reciprocate. have been offline for most of the summer, only sneaking in the library (filled with summer tourists) for occasional 15 minute stints. now back at work, so when things settle, will be more active again. V
Date: 9/1/2013 2:15:00 PM
wowowow, I am so glad to be seeing THIS one. yOu have some outstanding lines in this one, very creative and romantic. A fave.
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Date: 9/3/2013 1:41:00 PM
thanks Andrea....am back online again. started work last week, so now can be part of the world. This work is one of my fave's too, so it is a pleasure to be able to share it. will write more to you soon....
Date: 9/1/2013 1:43:00 PM
Hi Victoria, , Congratulations on your awesome win....................... SKAT
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Date: 9/3/2013 1:42:00 PM
thanks....so pleased you took the time to read it! V
Date: 8/31/2013 8:58:00 PM
congrats on your win with this beautiful poem...enjoyed the read :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 2:57:00 PM
Sandra, thank you for the comment. I love to hear from anyone who takes the time to read my work. V
Date: 8/3/2013 9:39:00 PM
wow..mesmerizing.... love it...SKAT
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 8/12/2013 6:34:00 PM
thanks...i know you read/write prolifically, so your opinion is valued.....V

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