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Stay My Valentine

won't you be my valentine put up with me believe my lies hold your nose use blind eye's listen to me snore all night let me control the remote most of the time help me buy my toys when i whine and don't ever leave me keep me from crying be my valentine for all time

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 4/5/2012 12:47:00 PM

This is cute John and had to laugh because that remote control is hard to get out of a man's hand. love phyl

Carol Eastman

Date: 3/2/2012 8:46:00 AM

Congratulations on the win. Cowboy form? I'll have to look it up.... This was very interesting... Facinated me.

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/22/2012 8:49:00 PM

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/22/2012 8:12:00 PM

Share your sweet secret John, who is she? Such a heartwarming write for a lucky girl! And thanks for your dear comment - made my day! :) Luv, Lizzie

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/22/2012 8:46:00 PM

lizzy, there is no secret. i'm kinda single. but i was married once. and i wish my wife was as i discribed. but i do pay tribute to all those wives out there that submit to this poem everyday. and i say dispight what we smell like at the end of the day we do love you. with all of our heart. signed, husband

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 11:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your super placement in ~P.D's~ "Any Valentine Poem Will Do" contest John III. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/20/2012 3:51:00 AM

Congrat. on your win,you definitely made me smile,thanks for that-Charma :)

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/19/2012 1:24:00 PM

I see congrats are in order, and I see andrea enjoyed it too :-) and guess who had a win with your valentine poem in the other valentine contest? AND we are both seven down on the list, clickety-click...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/18/2012 9:24:00 PM

this is GREAT, john . so realistic!! Congrats on your win. Much enjoyed.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2012 4:44:00 PM

Ahhhhhhh!..Sara

Don Johnson

Date: 2/18/2012 4:16:00 PM

good one mate....very well done

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/18/2012 3:07:00 PM

I love it. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Ralph Taylor

Date: 2/18/2012 12:20:00 PM

Congrats, John. Great job. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/18/2012 2:15:00 AM

Congratulations John and yes please. this is lovely xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/17/2012 9:43:00 PM

John, congratulations... with your wonderful win in my contest. Thanks for sending out more love this pass valentines. Have yourself a nighty nite. I'm also Sorry for confusing, all my winners. ~Always*PD

Jack Horne

Date: 2/15/2012 1:23:00 PM

LOL, witty and sweet piece, John

Lisa Cooper

Date: 2/14/2012 5:42:00 PM

I would follow you around....I could be your lost toy.... :) just teasing, great pen lovely as always john!

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/14/2012 8:25:00 PM

lost toy; i could dwell on that for a while.

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/14/2012 7:38:00 PM

Wow, a fan.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 2/14/2012 5:16:00 PM

"believe my lies" don't I already? "listen to me snore all night" I shall purchase earplugs (they'll come in useful for the whining too) oh! I KNEW this reminded me of something, that dr hook song "who's gonna water my plants? who's gonna patch my pants..." all together now "whoo-oo-oo if not you" haha

John Loving Iii
Date: 2/14/2012 7:39:00 PM

babes, i would never lie to you.