Stay Awhile

Marie’s kind and gentle spirit was called by death,
eating away, wasting her earthly form.
Still, her husband could bring a twinkle to her eye.
For life, sweet life and him, she’d try and stay awhile.

Eating away, wasting, her earthly form,
death could not take her love from him.
For life, sweet life, and him, she’d try and stay awhile.
She prayed to see her face once more in his eyes.    

Death could not take her love from him.
Dear husband, companion, rare soul mate,
she prayed to see her face once more in his eyes,    
the bride she’d been, the wife she’d always be.

Dear husband, companion, rare soul mate,
he felt her slipping through the hands of time.
The bride she’d been, the wife she’d always be,
would she soon lie with lilies white and fair as she? 

He felt her slipping through the hands of time.
Still, her husband could bring a twinkle to her eye.
Would she soon lie with lilies white and fair as she ?
Marie’s kind and gentle spirit was called by death.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Williams Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 11:55 AM
hey Debbie, congrats on your win, very tenderly portryed, David
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July 27, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Congrats Debbie on your fab fifth place with an equally fab entry luv..in Pantoum..great one..
Brown Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:57 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 27, 2011 at 10:55 AM
riveting, debs..applause to you for the thrilling win! ..:) huggs!
Singh Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 10:17 PM
awesome work.. beautifully crafted...
Johnson Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 3:33 PM
Would she soon lie with lilies white and fair as she, the tragic deathly side:( great verse babe, Don
George   Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 5:42 AM
Absolutely breathtaking Deb. A MASTERPIECE. Elaine
Guzzi Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 7:19 AM
I sat next to this couple on the plane home [sigh] being an energetic healer it was a bit hard knowing how close to death she was BUT she was still SO full of love of him and life! Thanks Lainie!
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July 11, 2011 at 6:27 AM
miss you miss you... sorry i have been a bad poet.. but, only for staying away... This is deep and sad. I think we never know what we become when we go away at the end.. great poem,, D.G.,... God bless,..p.d.
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July 10, 2011 at 5:13 PM
Sigh, this is beautiful...I love this form although i really struggle with it... BG
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July 10, 2011 at 5:03 PM
wow what an amazing write you penned Deb. This sounds like a winner to me. Yes, my first date, first kiss was great. Helps when someone is a hunk ha ha ha. Sure brought back memories with that write. sooooo long ago. love phyl
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July 10, 2011 at 12:57 PM
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July 10, 2011 at 12:39 PM
wonderful entry Debbie, I am in awe of this form, yesterday I sat down to start my first attempts at it, I feel the same anxiety I did doing an english lit assignment I didn't understand, but still determined to nail it. best of luck in Carol'd contest
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