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Static Perseverance

All he can see is at the end of a pencil, Sedated by a 3 inch piece of lead, Self-portraits are of only a stencil, A picture stains the paintings in his head, How far does the land go beyond the window? Far enough to see the end of the day. And does the bird fly as far as the wind blows? Far enough to find a warm nest to lay. Her ears scorched by the sound of scorn, Laughter tears and turns tears to her eyes, Bows to down into the form as to which she was born, And dreams of dissolving into a dawning sky, How numb I have become only known by numeric? Taught only in the trenches of comparison. How cold the hand grows held up in hysteric? Endure and you’ll ensure your end, my son.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/26/2015 1:18:00 AM
Well constructed form of poetry. I enjoy the flow of it. I sense a want and need for freedom in this verse. Pain agony and abuse also arise in my mind. i really enjoyed reading this. Well done
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Shane Rundle
Date: 3/29/2015 10:40:00 PM
Thanks for the kind words Vintage Sparrow, inspired from my students when I started working as a teacher in China where the classes go up to 40+ students and then I remembered some tough emotions of my peers and myself going through a deflated educational system. glad you enjoyed it
Date: 3/25/2015 8:41:00 AM
Hey Shane, a warm welcome to Poetry Soup. This is a deep and introspective piece from you. Well written and with great imagery. Well done!! Be Blessed, Neva
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Shane Rundle
Date: 3/29/2015 10:41:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Neva, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 1/25/2015 12:50:00 AM
Hi Shane, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@
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Shane Rundle
Date: 3/3/2015 7:19:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Linda. Where can i find your contest? I look forward to reading your poems and learning from other poets on this site. Take care in 2015
Date: 1/24/2015 6:17:00 AM
Shane, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poet's around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shane Rundle
Date: 3/3/2015 7:20:00 PM
Thank you for the welcome Skat, I'm looking forward to reading and learning from new poets so any comments on my work would be greatly appreciated. Best of luck in 2015!
Date: 1/22/2015 4:57:00 AM
- Hey Shane, nice to read your first poem :) - Welcome to P - Soup !! - Hope to read many more poems from you in the future - // Anne-Lise :)
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Shane Rundle
Date: 3/3/2015 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Anne, looking forward to reading your material. Have a nice day

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