Static

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Slandered wavelengths
from an old worn out speaker
cracking with each unbalanced bass note
Finding my brain on overload
and a slower heart beat
out of tune 

Static becomes the union,
tuning dial gone, volume at high
glowing in the corner of cobweb melodies
lingering on a distant shelf
now sinking lower in this
roadside armchair (Where are the earplugs when you need them)

An empty bottled fortress
protects the pain at my feet,
brown glass soldiers stand guard, 
bottle cap mementos flip
like dancing beans on a folding table 
at El Mercado

One more for the road
(like I need this)
along crooked dotted lines, weaving nonsense
two at a time, smirking
snickering like children hiding from a babysitter,
mimicking the way

Still the static, white noise,
drowns out the joy and the trees cry, 
when birdsong of night haunts with a sound
interrupting the dance of the 
beer bottle chorus line
and I tap a painful toe

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Date: 11/9/2019 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful melancholy poetry, Chris! Such tasteful imagery ... burp, excuse me. lol! This is a very creative poem. Has an insightful edginess to it that is soul real. LOVE it! Amethyst ink poetry. Love and peace forever.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/11/2019 8:17:00 AM
Thanks Freddie. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one
Date: 10/3/2019 4:24:00 PM
Oh no! Not more empty brown soldiers!! This is great Chris now you've got to believe it! Sorry if your in a sour mood...better days are coming ...better days!
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 4:33:00 PM
I have cases of them in case I never need more. Thanks again my friend for reading and commenting
Date: 10/3/2019 12:43:00 PM
Melancholy sadness my friend? You sound so sad in this and it tugs at my heart that you should feel this way! Hope it's just a poem but I feel memories have came back bringing this sad mood! ;( beauty in the sadness you do it so well!;(
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Date: 10/3/2019 1:02:00 PM
Something came back, that's for sure and it did cause this mood. Thank you so much Brenda.
Date: 10/3/2019 12:21:00 PM
This one is a deep dive. I imagine a Tom Waits soundtrack playing in the background. Excellent ink. xomo
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Date: 10/3/2019 12:30:00 PM
I know you can't hear me but I am saying thank you in a low baritone gravly voice right now. : ) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 10/3/2019 12:06:00 PM
i can hear that slanderous static as it echoes its crackles through your words... now i too am trying to tune it out...wow, your use of wording to set the scene just amazes me...you don't leave a single detail out...i am there, watching, listening, feeling this melancholy mood... amazing writing as always my friend! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/3/2019 12:29:00 PM
I'm sorry, can you speak up? I having a hard time hearing you over all of this... : ) Thank you my friend. Your kind comments always sing such a sweet tune to my ears.
Date: 10/3/2019 11:55:00 AM
Wow! The lines and descriptions in this are amazing. brown glass soldiers stand guard, dancing beans on a folding table, bottle cap mementos flip! Your talent shines, my friend :)
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Date: 10/3/2019 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I wish there was another way to say thank you because you show me so much kindness I feel like I am repeating myself often. I guess I could say Merci or Gracious but I think I'll just stick with thank you and hope you know how much I appreciate you.
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