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State of Mind

Yellow leaves are sprinkled on the lawn Autumn has started to decorate The air is brisk, but the sun is bright It's time for change and smiles to shine Time to pick apples and choose our thoughts It is time to recognize it's a state of mind And in this state of mind ... Letting go and falling is a dance on air When you settle, your heart will applaud Heidi Sands 9/27/23

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Joseph May

Date: 9/28/2023 10:00:00 AM

Wonderful write Heidi, I love the last 2 lines

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/27/2023 9:15:00 PM

Very lovely, Heidi:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2023 7:04:00 AM

Good morning. Thank you Joanna :)

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/27/2023 6:01:00 PM

Time for an attitude change from those hectic summer days to lazy fire pit evenings.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2023 6:40:00 PM

Exactly Jerry. I love the woodstove. And the winter scenes :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/27/2023 2:22:00 PM

you captured fall beautifully...a season of change with dancing leaves...how one sees it is truly a state of mind. Nicely done! enjoy your day, Sara

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2023 6:40:00 PM

Thank you very much Sara :)

Silent One

Date: 9/27/2023 12:38:00 PM

You really created vivid imagery here, right from the first line.. I can picture in my head what you wanted to create in your poem.. Good luck in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2023 6:39:00 PM

Thank you so much. That is a nice compliment from you. You are a great writer ! :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2023 8:14:00 AM

In tune with the season. Lovely write, my friend.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2023 8:27:00 AM

Thank you Vijay. Trying to be. There are still toxic issues here. I hope you have a nice day :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/27/2023 7:33:00 AM

- A wonderful time with the fruits of the earth, Heidi :) - hugs

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2023 7:40:00 AM

Yes. Thank you. Enjoy. . Hugs :)