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Stars of Hearts

You took my hand I held you tight Knowing, this is it Long waited for, but right We laughed together Played games of our own No-one could see What we’ve always known The sun shined bright On our bodies below Our smiles spread A long lasting glow Then, night came The stars sparkled above With designs of hearts In the sky, from our love Heidi Sands 12/14/18

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Date: 12/15/2018 3:12:00 PM
A gorgeous romantic poem, Heidi. Such sheer playful joy. Sweet poetry. I love it, I love it a lot! The title is very creative. Aurora bright right. Love and joy always
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/15/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Freddie. I hope you have a happy and peaceful holiday season :)
Date: 12/14/2018 12:37:00 PM
You captured the child in you...A star of innocence indeed...All the best Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/14/2018 12:54:00 PM
Thank you Arturo! I appreciate your comment. Have a nice day :)
Date: 12/14/2018 11:01:00 AM
Words of joy and happiness..well written poem of longing and romance.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/14/2018 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Vijay! :)
Date: 12/14/2018 10:41:00 AM
Happiness so well expressed dearest, Heidi ! Makes one wish to live moments like that at least once in his life! Masterfully done!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/14/2018 10:44:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios. I agree with an experience like this in a life time :)

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