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Written - 23rd November

Stars of clarity in sky appear A faithful, exquisite crystal sphere Visibly there for the world to scan Created by the Miracle Man. Angels of the night, dainty dancers The light fandango for romancers Stars are for lovers and dreamers too In your eyes they’re twinkling just for you. Stars are a wonder, gracing the night Showcasing celestial paradise Should you find yourself lost and alone Stars will guide you safely back to home. Stars are made from God's Heavenly grace Meaning so much to those who have faith Reach up and catch a clarity star Hold it close in heart where'er you are.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/2/2023 11:04:00 AM

As lovely as a star filled night, Belle! Stars are indeed "a wonder, gracing the night." I love the line "stars are made from God's heavenly grace" and they will lead us "home." Best wishes for the contest! I do love your touching poems of faith. Blessings of heavenly grace to you!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 12/2/2023 1:52:00 PM

Thank you so much Sam, I appreciate every kind word. Blessings of heavenly grace in return to you… Belle

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/28/2023 2:01:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Belle - If I could reach the stars, I would pick one for you :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2023 2:13:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I’d do the same for you too :) ~ Hugs, Belle

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2023 7:40:00 PM

Love the inspirational feel you’ve created in this poem.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2023 2:11:00 PM

Thank you for that Eve ~ Belle

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/25/2023 4:57:00 PM

This should do well in the contest. Bravo!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2023 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Richard, very much… Belle

Deb M

Date: 11/25/2023 2:45:00 PM

Oh Belle what an uplifting poem with so many wonderful lines….love this! Debx

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/28/2023 2:09:00 PM

Thank you very much Deb, truly appreciated… Belle

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 11/23/2023 5:23:00 PM

A beautiful poem my friend. Good luck in this contest. However, with such a magnificent talent as yours, luck is not needed.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/24/2023 12:52:00 AM

Jerry, thank you so much, your words touch my heart and have made my day. Bless you, Belle

Silent One

Date: 11/23/2023 12:30:00 PM

Stars are a wonder, gracing the night Showcasing celestial paradise Should you find yourself lost and alone Stars will guide you safely back to home... Love that stanza... your poems as always rhymes so well..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/23/2023 3:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Silent One, encouraging words as always. Bless you, Belle

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/23/2023 4:55:00 AM

such an inspirational and uplifting poem, Belle. You have such a gift and way with words. I especially liked the last verse! I think this is a great contest contender. Best wishes with that. hugs, Sara

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/23/2023 6:10:00 AM

Thank you Sara, features of the sky are inspiring to poets and contests such as this from Ink Empress motivate the muse. Blessings and hugs, Belle