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Thinking, I lay awake Amongst twisted blankets Tossing until I say for goodness sake The house is solitude and quiet I sit at the window seeking a star But find just scars Oh, twinkle, twinkle little star, above Take this sorrow and let me keep the love Long, I stay there waiting So my star can answer But dawn is breaking and night is fading And all the birds call with their chatter It is morning, it is morning, oh bliss Give star a kiss Sun is peaking through the emerald trees And here comes the sweet morning breeze __________________________ April 21, 2015 Poetry/Rhyme/Stars and Scars All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France Submitted to the contest, Premiere Contest Number 2 sponsor, A Skat, Judged Fifth Place ___________________________________ Submitted to the contest, Second Place Only II sponsor, Laura Loo (Premiere Contest) Judged Second Place ____________________________________ Written for the contest, Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star sponsor, Kelly Deschler, Judged 05/2015 Second Place

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Date: 7/25/2016 7:52:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful winning poem.
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Date: 7/21/2016 4:09:00 PM
Broken Wings, congrats on your lovely placement lady! :)-luloo
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:47:00 PM
This poem is so good,it deserves to win again and again. Thanks for sharing your words with us!
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Date: 7/21/2016 1:33:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my second Premiere contest. Stop by my latest blog "The Perfect One." Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 7/21/2016 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/21/2016 11:02:00 AM
Congrats on your triple win...this is so touching.
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Date: 7/21/2016 10:11:00 AM
Such beautiful write BW! I salute you! Congratulations and keep on writing more. You are indeed an inspiration! ;)
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Date: 7/21/2016 8:25:00 AM
Many congrats on your win Constance its lovely to read this again:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/11/2016 8:27:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your top placement with this deep verse!! ;-)
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Date: 7/10/2016 12:03:00 PM
Awesome win, Broken.... skat
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Date: 7/9/2016 9:41:00 PM
Beautiful, I saw the curtains move .. congratulations on your win ... CayCay
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Date: 7/9/2016 4:35:00 PM
Constance, congratulations on your podium 2nd place win in Laura's Premiere contest! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 7/9/2016 2:50:00 PM
Broken Wings, just beautiful, as always..you have a true gift lady! congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/11/2015 3:28:00 PM
Wonderful poem congratulations on your wonderful win a 7 :~) hugs <3
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Date: 5/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
Words that express beauty and sadness in your lovely poem, BW. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/9/2015 8:01:00 PM
Broken, Congratulations In Kelly's "Twinkle Twinkle Little Star" contest. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/9/2015 6:42:00 PM
Broken, Congrats on your Twinkle Little Star win. SKAT LOVE
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Date: 5/9/2015 1:03:00 PM
I truly enjoyed your creative take on the theme. Congrats on a win with this beautiful write!
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Date: 4/25/2015 6:34:00 AM
Graceful flow and lovely wordings ... :)!! no need for the imagery for your poem paint it masterfully!!!~olive eloisa :)
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Date: 4/22/2015 4:16:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work today..Star Of The Morning can be bliss ..Enjoyed reading your work..It reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2015 2:40:00 PM
Well chosen words come alive in the reading and we cannot suppress a nod at the descriptive narration. Very well penned. Emile. #7
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:58:00 AM
Beautyful poem, a full 7
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Date: 4/21/2015 9:52:00 PM
Oh there is such beauty in this but sadness too...Love your beautiful poignant writes. A #7.
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Date: 4/21/2015 5:44:00 PM
beautiful but sad imagery broken wings - I think this will do with Kelly:-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
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Date: 4/21/2015 2:57:00 PM
Lovely rhyme; good luck with the contest.
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