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Starlit Memories

Starlit Memories “…recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind like breezes blown…” Samuel Coleridge Midnight reveries tickle my memories When I see bright asterisms ascend Through rivers of stars summers past I see Constellations retell their starry legends, Storied tales of fantasy in starlight, I search the sky for my celestial friends Lying in grassy fields on warm summer nights Spellbound eyes saw the sparkling stars at play My imagination soared with the eagle’s flight Upon the evening star a wish I prayed, A plea for peace on fiery comet tails, Dreams star dusted in the Milky Way In childhood innocence, wonder prevailed On astral magic winds like hidden grails 10-11-22 Contest: Writing Challenge – “T” Past Memories Sponsor: Constance La France “T” form chosen – Terza Rima Rhymes checked with www.rhymezone Aquila, or the Eagle, is a constellation seen in the summer sky.

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Date: 11/12/2022 1:25:00 AM
Sam, very nice and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/12/2022 11:09:00 PM
This was fun, Constance! Combining my summer stargazing memories with a "T" form was a uniquely special experience. Grateful for my placement and your contest! Blessings of the season to you!
Date: 11/4/2022 7:23:00 PM
Such a very beautiful and magical write on your wonderful child mem'ries my dear friend Sam. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for another precious gem. So enjoyed. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/12/2022 11:05:00 PM
Hi Len! Thank you so much for your lovely note dear friend! Summer stargazing was something special, something magical that captured my imagination. I am so happy you enjoyed stargazing together! Sending you twinkling blessings dear Len.
Date: 11/4/2022 10:47:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery you created with your memories of midnight reveries dear Sam... Enjoyed reading... Congratulations on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/4/2022 10:58:00 AM
Hi Ani! Thank you so much for your lovely note and your congratulations. I am so happy you enjoyed this trip into the stars through a child's eyes. Those summer evenings were magical times of wonder and wondering. I still love to stargaze in any season. Found a stargazing chart designed in a circle that rotates the stars each night and changes with each season. There are several apps that show the night sky each night. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings on celestial wings! So wonderful to receive your email!
Date: 11/1/2022 8:25:00 PM
Happy to return with congratulations on your win, well done!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2022 9:40:00 AM
Thank you so much Michelle! It was truly a wonderful experience to go back to those warm summer nights of stargazing. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Blessings of starlit skies to you!
Date: 11/1/2022 7:29:00 AM
Congratulation on your contest win, Sam. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great childhood poem.
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/1/2022 11:56:00 AM
Many thanks Lasaad! Every time I gaze at the stars in the night sky memories of those warm summer evenings return to guide my eyes. Thanks for stargazing with me. Always more fun with a friend! Blessings!
Date: 10/18/2022 4:04:00 PM
I wish I could still see the stars with the wonder of childhood, this is so charming and magical, hope this is a winner for you~
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Date: 10/20/2022 9:37:00 AM
I remember how magical stargazing was as a child - waiting to wish on the first star as "When You Wish Upon a Star" sang in my mind. I am so happy that this poem brought back that wonder to you and that we got to share in the delight of looking deeply into the night sky! Take care dear friend. Sending you the blessings of a child's heart on a starlit night!
Date: 10/12/2022 11:55:00 AM
Oh, to experience the world with wonderment as I did in childhood! Vividly descriptive, lovely poem, Sam! Janice
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/20/2022 9:33:00 AM
Greetings Janice! I so agree with you about regaining the wonder and awe of the world like a child. Life can really get in the way of that kind of experience! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. It is so appreciated! I loved the foundational quote, the invitation to revisit those happy times of childhood - especially stargazing on warm summer nights! Sending you blessings of starlight!
Date: 10/12/2022 10:53:00 AM
A starry journey through time, Very nicely penned Sam, Best wishes in the Contest
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/12/2022 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Joseph! Stargazing has always been a favored pastime even in fall, winter and spring and no matter my age! It always brings back memories of this happy summer pastime. Starry blessings to you!
Date: 10/12/2022 7:57:00 AM
Oh i do love your journey, Sam, one that takes me back. The poetry is wonderful. Harry
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/12/2022 9:31:00 AM
Hi Harry! A heartfelt thank you to you for your delightful message. Funny how a poem about stargazing seems to touch a deep chord of memory in so many of us. I am so happy that we could journey back in time to that time of wonder and awe as children. As a little girl I remember receiving a book about going to the moon and, voila! many years later I watched the moon landing with friends! Thank you for joining in the magic my friend. Sending you blessings on the wings of stars!
Date: 10/12/2022 6:22:00 AM
what a magical write here, my friend - truly beautiful
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 10/12/2022 9:25:00 AM
Jack, thank you so much! I loved to lay on the lawn and stargaze when I was growing up. It was a favorite summer pastime on clear, warm nights. A time for wondering and imagining. I still love to stargaze. Thanks for sharing in the magic. Blessings of clear nights with stars to you my friend!

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