Starlit Memories

Starlit Memories

“…recently scenes of early life have stolen into my mind like breezes blown…”
Samuel Coleridge 

Midnight reveries tickle my memories
When I see bright asterisms ascend
Through rivers of stars summers past I see

Constellations retell their starry legends,
Storied tales of fantasy in starlight,
I search the sky for my celestial friends

Lying in grassy fields on warm summer nights
Spellbound eyes saw the sparkling stars at play
My imagination soared with the eagle’s flight

Upon the evening star a wish I prayed,
A plea for peace on fiery comet tails,
Dreams star dusted in the Milky Way  

In childhood innocence, wonder prevailed
On astral magic winds like hidden grails

10-11-22
Contest: Writing Challenge – “T” Past Memories
Sponsor: Constance La France

“T” form chosen – Terza Rima
Rhymes checked with www.rhymezone

Aquila, or the Eagle, is a constellation seen in the summer sky.
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La France Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 1:25 AM
Sam, very nice and congratulations on your placement in my contest, Writing Challenge - Past Memories- "T" Forms, and of course I like the quote, well done !
Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 11:09 PM
This was fun, Constance! Combining my summer stargazing memories with a "T" form was a uniquely special experience. Grateful for my placement and your contest! Blessings of the season to you!
Gasun Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Such a very beautiful and magical write on your wonderful child mem'ries my dear friend Sam. Congratulations on your win! Thanks a lot for another precious gem. So enjoyed. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs.
Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 11:05 PM
Hi Len! Thank you so much for your lovely note dear friend! Summer stargazing was something special, something magical that captured my imagination. I am so happy you enjoyed stargazing together! Sending you twinkling blessings dear Len.
Jayasankar Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 10:47 AM
Such beautiful imagery you created with your memories of midnight reveries dear Sam... Enjoyed reading... Congratulations on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani
Kauffman Avatar
November 4, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Hi Ani! Thank you so much for your lovely note and your congratulations. I am so happy you enjoyed this trip into the stars through a child's eyes. Those summer evenings were magical times of wonder and wondering. I still love to stargaze in any season. Found a stargazing chart designed in a circle that rotates the stars each night and changes with each season. There are several apps that show the night sky each night. Hope you are well. Sending you blessings on celestial wings! So wonderful to receive your email!
Faulkner Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 8:25 PM
Happy to return with congratulations on your win, well done!
Kauffman Avatar
November 2, 2022 at 9:40 AM
Thank you so much Michelle! It was truly a wonderful experience to go back to those warm summer nights of stargazing. I am so glad you enjoyed it! Blessings of starlit skies to you!
Poet Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 7:29 AM
Congratulation on your contest win, Sam. I'm sure it's amply deserved with your great childhood poem.
Kauffman Avatar
November 1, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Many thanks Lasaad! Every time I gaze at the stars in the night sky memories of those warm summer evenings return to guide my eyes. Thanks for stargazing with me. Always more fun with a friend! Blessings!
Faulkner Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 4:04 PM
I wish I could still see the stars with the wonder of childhood, this is so charming and magical, hope this is a winner for you~
Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 9:37 AM
I remember how magical stargazing was as a child - waiting to wish on the first star as "When You Wish Upon a Star" sang in my mind. I am so happy that this poem brought back that wonder to you and that we got to share in the delight of looking deeply into the night sky! Take care dear friend. Sending you the blessings of a child's heart on a starlit night!
Canerdy Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 11:55 AM
Oh, to experience the world with wonderment as I did in childhood! Vividly descriptive, lovely poem, Sam! Janice
Kauffman Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Greetings Janice! I so agree with you about regaining the wonder and awe of the world like a child. Life can really get in the way of that kind of experience! Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. It is so appreciated! I loved the foundational quote, the invitation to revisit those happy times of childhood - especially stargazing on warm summer nights! Sending you blessings of starlight!
May Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 10:53 AM
A starry journey through time, Very nicely penned Sam, Best wishes in the Contest
Kauffman Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 11:22 AM
Thank you so much Joseph! Stargazing has always been a favored pastime even in fall, winter and spring and no matter my age! It always brings back memories of this happy summer pastime. Starry blessings to you!
Horsman Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 7:57 AM
Oh i do love your journey, Sam, one that takes me back. The poetry is wonderful. Harry
Kauffman Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 9:31 AM
Hi Harry! A heartfelt thank you to you for your delightful message. Funny how a poem about stargazing seems to touch a deep chord of memory in so many of us. I am so happy that we could journey back in time to that time of wonder and awe as children. As a little girl I remember receiving a book about going to the moon and, voila! many years later I watched the moon landing with friends! Thank you for joining in the magic my friend. Sending you blessings on the wings of stars!
Horne Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 6:22 AM
what a magical write here, my friend - truly beautiful
Kauffman Avatar
October 12, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Jack, thank you so much! I loved to lay on the lawn and stargaze when I was growing up. It was a favorite summer pastime on clear, warm nights. A time for wondering and imagining. I still love to stargaze. Thanks for sharing in the magic. Blessings of clear nights with stars to you my friend!
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