Starlight Teardrops

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in a hole A most secret hiding place within my mind This darkest abyss in the depths of my soul Only your touch, these chains could unbind I slipped on a teardrop and landed on the moon Its ivory beams bathe the path in frosty light That guides you through the forest to return soon And wrap me in your warmth in the chill of night I slipped on a teardrop and landed in the clouds Where I can watch and smile when you fly by You glide on strong wings, nimble and proud My soaring goddess, blessing from on high I slipped on a teardrop and landed on the Sun Its blinding rays tore through my every conceit My angel took my hand and away we did run Together, our souls bathed in gold light and heat I slipped on a teardrop and landed in the Milky Way Hand in hand with my love, in rapturous flight Flying with you forever through heaven I would stay Eternally bathed in divine love’s radiant light
6/19/16 © by Author Contest: I SLIPPED ON A TEARDROP AND LANDED . . . Sponsor: Cindi Rockwell

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Date: 6/25/2016 1:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tom... Skat
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/25/2016 5:57:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 6/25/2016 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem, Tom! This was my first contest and I couldn't believe how many amazing entries I received! Thank you for sharing yours!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/25/2016 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Cindi! Some writes are more effort-full than others; this one just flowed out. It was a great prompt. Lots of ways to go with it...
Date: 6/21/2016 7:58:00 AM
This is perfect! I expect you will do well.
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/21/2016 8:25:00 PM
Thanks, Richard!
Date: 6/20/2016 10:24:00 PM
Awesome write Tom....best of luck for the contest!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Meenakshi!
Date: 6/20/2016 3:59:00 PM
wow, this is very inventive. You chose a great way and form of poetry to do the theme, Tom
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 6/20/2016 3:40:00 PM
A very visual and quite frankly wonderful write! Your imagery is stark and quite clear! The best to you in this contest Tom! This is unique!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, Walter!
Date: 6/20/2016 2:29:00 PM
What a wonderful write, beautiful imagery, and flow. Love all references to celestial bodies, just great! Hope this does well, reads like a winner!
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Tom Quigley
Date: 6/20/2016 10:31:00 PM
Thank you, John!
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