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Starlight Teardrops

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in a hole
A most secret hiding place within my mind
This darkest abyss in the depths of my soul
Only your touch, these chains could unbind

I slipped on a teardrop and landed on the moon
Its ivory beams bathe the path in frosty light
That guides you through the forest to return soon
And wrap me in your warmth in the chill of night

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in the clouds
Where I can watch and smile when you fly by
You glide on strong wings, nimble and proud
My soaring goddess, blessing from on high

I slipped on a teardrop and landed on the Sun
Its blinding rays tore through my every conceit
My angel took my hand and away we did run
Together, our souls bathed in gold light and heat

I slipped on a teardrop and landed in the Milky Way
Hand in hand with my love, in rapturous flight
Flying with you forever through heaven I would stay
Eternally bathed in divine love’s radiant light

6/19/16
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Contest: I SLIPPED ON A TEARDROP AND LANDED . . . 
Sponsor: Cindi Rockwell

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Skat A Date: 6/25/2016 1:43:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Tom... Skat Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/25/2016 5:57:00 PM Thanks!

Cindi Rockwell Date: 6/25/2016 9:59:00 AM Beautiful poem, Tom! This was my first contest and I couldn't believe how many amazing entries I received! Thank you for sharing yours! Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/25/2016 5:59:00 PM Thank you, Cindi! Some writes are more effort-full than others; this one just flowed out. It was a great prompt. Lots of ways to go with it...

Richard Lamoureux Date: 6/21/2016 7:58:00 AM This is perfect! I expect you will do well. Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/21/2016 8:25:00 PM Thanks, Richard!

Meenakshi Raina Date: 6/20/2016 10:24:00 PM Awesome write Tom....best of luck for the contest! Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM Thank you, Meenakshi!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/20/2016 3:59:00 PM wow, this is very inventive. You chose a great way and form of poetry to do the theme, Tom Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Walter T. Ashe Date: 6/20/2016 3:40:00 PM A very visual and quite frankly wonderful write! Your imagery is stark and quite clear! The best to you in this contest Tom! This is unique! Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/20/2016 10:30:00 PM Thanks, Walter!

John Hamilton Date: 6/20/2016 2:29:00 PM What a wonderful write, beautiful imagery, and flow. Love all references to celestial bodies, just great! Hope this does well, reads like a winner! Login to Reply Tom Quigley Date: 6/20/2016 10:31:00 PM Thank you, John!