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Starlight Haze - Collaboration

Many mirrors have been broken some by me and some by you When the stars of heaven appear, we'll know what to do Yesterday's reflection is a changeling my friend So let's hang on to tomorrow, with hope that never ends When the stars of heaven appear we'll know what to do! For future hopes aren't cast in glass with fragile crystal gaze as loving dreams are captured entwined in starlight's haze We lift our eyes to heaven's realm to find a future bright With each desire we hold captive to entanglements of light as loving dreams are captured, entwined in starlight's haze. Copyright © Sam Scott |Mystic Rose Once again thank you Sam, for working alongside me

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Date: 2/10/2024 10:38:00 PM
This is such an impeccable and elegant collaboration by you both, sweet Vie and wonderful Sam.. How beautifully you both have painted a vivid scene, which inspires one to look for hope ans faith in crystals of future, beyond the melancholy within brokenness.. I felt so many emotions, gliding as soft lyrics in between your words. Absolutely loved reading this! Sending so many best wishes and light to you both, keep shining and writing. This is a FAV :)
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/11/2024 10:31:00 AM
Can I jump in and say - thank you Hiya! I can throroughly recommend Vie (Rose) as a prospective collaborator - such a lovely lyrical poetic and kind heart. Bless you :))
Date: 2/10/2024 10:04:00 PM
Dear Rose, Thank you for trusting me with your very precious and delightful words. It was a collaboration I very much was thrilled to be part of. Thank you for the courage to invite me, the privilege was all mine, you write beautifully :))
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Date: 2/10/2024 9:33:00 PM
What a wonderful collaboration, my sweet friend Vie and Sam Scott. You two write so well together, a flawless, seamless write; you have such similar styles that it is hard to tell who wrote what; a fave for me...Maria
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/15/2024 11:28:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/10/2024 3:30:00 PM
exquisite poem and collaboration between you and Sam...you work well together. I especially liked "let's hang on to tomorrow, with hope that never ends.' When we lift our eyes to heaven we're filled with hope, entwined in starlight's haze. Just beautiful. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Sam Scott
Date: 2/15/2024 11:29:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 2/10/2024 12:21:00 PM
I'm sensing a deep meaning that goes beyond words. A captured dream would be a fine accomplishment, since so many are lost in the morning.
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