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Staring Into the Abyss

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she sat there lost in a nightmare now and then over and over again throbbing in her head echo of the words he said imagining a different rewrite as she sat there in the night staring into the abyss remembering their last kiss AP: 2nd place 2022 Submitted on March 9, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL.2_RHYME: 5. STARING INTO THE ABYSS sponsored by EDWARD IBEH

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 3/24/2019 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved win in my contest, Line:-) Awesome poem with vivid imagery!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/24/2019 9:26:00 AM

Thanks, Edward. Much appreciated.

Purbasha Roy

Date: 3/14/2019 5:02:00 AM

I really loved the tightened deep verses.I hope I too write something worthy.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/14/2019 11:49:00 AM

You have great poetry, Purbasha. Does your muse need a little extra nudge?

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/12/2019 12:44:00 AM

Powerful imagery; good luck in the contest.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 8:33:00 AM

Thanks, ML.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2019 10:04:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, my friend. This one is a winner!

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 10:33:00 PM

Thanks for your optimistic compliment, Caren.

Carole Duet

Date: 3/10/2019 3:52:00 PM

Just perfect, Line. Sometimes losing a lover puts us in a trance, in shock so to speak, as we sit motionless replaying a scene over and over in our mind just "staring into the abyss" of the emptiness we feel. Good luck in the contest, Line, though I doubt you need it.

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 4:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely visit and compliment, Carole.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/10/2019 2:11:00 PM

Well done Line :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/10/2019 4:07:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi. Much appreciated.