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Stardust on Autumn Leaves

the last tastes of summer slowly evaporate on my tender tongue. no longer will fresh strawberries burst outside my cottage window, nor will the smell of blooming lilacs fill my lungs. as the first chills of changing seasons graze my skin, gently rubbing my arms, i feel goosebumps forming from within. the sunlight of hope gives way to the dusk of sorrow, frost glistening as stardust reflects on autumn leaves. a misty fog rolls in over the browning hills, whilst isolation begins to take hold. the distant birdsong of an owl echoes through the painful landscape. staggering toward the unkempt window, i shut the lightly dusted shutters, so just for a brief moment in time, despondent worlds disappear. behind a fabricated reality, i can pretend with my indebted shadows. stammering, i find the play button on my stereo; goodbye to you rings in my mournful ears~ as the final warmth of yesterday shifts into the bitterness of perpetuity, leaving my somber sky adorned with pixelated promises, while this heart longs for an ethereal escape from a raven-winged horizon, cloaked in cracked amethysts and jinxed crystals.

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Date: 4/21/2025 11:49:00 AM
Hello Sara, this is an excellent piece and an enjoyable read. Nicely done.
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Date: 11/13/2024 11:54:00 AM
- A pleasure to read your winning poem, congratulations Sara :) - hugs
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Sara Jama
Date: 11/13/2024 12:20:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 11/13/2024 7:18:00 AM
Dear Sara, well, you already know what i will like and you did an exquisite job writing this very deeply evocative poem, flowing with such light imagery, i love the way youv started and also how youv stated “ No longer will fresh strawberries burst outside my cottage window, nor will the smell of blooming lilacs fill my lungs.“ ah that!! The artistic manner youv woven your words in such eloquence makes this poem stand out for me! The ending is beyond brilliant! And poignant! I felt the longing! Truly! Ah my dark heart felt this deeply! A fave this is! Congratulations on your top win!
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Sara Jama
Date: 11/13/2024 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much Ink for placing me in your contest.

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