stardust

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Written on November 27, 2023

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dust that lives on the edge of a star, reflecting a wish from afar.

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Silent One

Date: 12/8/2023 9:41:00 AM

Loved this one liner...was a winner for me..Congratulations on your placement

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/27/2023 3:47:00 PM

such a lovely and delicate monoku...liked it...have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 11/27/2023 12:50:00 PM

This is a brilliant one liner..

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 11/27/2023 4:47:00 AM

Hello Regina, your poem is a beautiful and succinct expression of longing and wonder. The imagery of dust on the edge of a star reflecting a distant wish is both evocative and poignant. - Blessings, Daniel