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This looked better on my home computer. I used the lipstick emoji for her
lips but when I posted it here it turned into to ?? marks.  Perhaps I should leave them there
as symbolic of the uncertainty of seeking fame. For now I changed them to indent brackets.

 

 

 

\|/ \|/ ^ ^. * movie star dreamer * <> * flutters her big eye lashes * * never quite enough *

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Date: 8/5/2025 11:00:00 AM
Nice Senryu, Suzanne. Good stuff! :) john
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Date: 8/4/2025 5:32:00 PM
Love the Senryu and the shape beside it, Suz. Nice to see your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/5/2025 2:23:00 AM
Thanks Bill, I haven't been here much and always wishing I had more time to write. Good to see you. SuZ
Date: 8/4/2025 4:20:00 PM
Great!
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/5/2025 2:22:00 AM
Thank so much, Kim
Date: 8/4/2025 3:10:00 PM
Never quite enough. I explored this then in my piece - Superstar. I wouldn't want to be famous for nothing. Nice senryu?
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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 8/4/2025 3:55:00 PM
Thanks Tom: Me neither. It seems to consume souls. This is my attempt at an Illusku. Not entering it though. Ha ha

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