Notes About The Poem

This looked better on my home computer. I used the lipstick emoji for her
lips but when I posted it here it turned into to ?? marks.  Perhaps I should leave them there
as symbolic of the uncertainty of seeking fame. For now I changed them to indent brackets.

 

 

 

Stardom

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^   ^.      *  movie star dreamer *
 <>       *  flutters her big eye lashes *
               *   never quite enough  *
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Greenhough Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 11:42 AM
This poem was unusual and captivating.
Delaney Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:06 PM
Thank you, Hilda, I appreciate your lovely comment.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 14, 2025 at 5:53 PM
most creative, Suzanne! Loved what you did here...wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Greenhough Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:23 AM
She must be cute. It is a very imaginative story.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 8:14 PM
It is not easy to do…a cute one! :)
Fleming Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Nice Senryu, Suzanne. Good stuff! :) john
Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 5:32 PM
Love the Senryu and the shape beside it, Suz. Nice to see your poetry today, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 2:23 AM
Thanks Bill, I haven't been here much and always wishing I had more time to write. Good to see you. SuZ
Rodrigues Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 4:20 PM
Great!
Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2025 at 2:22 AM
Thank so much, Kim
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